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  1. Gryphon

    Released a new chapter an got 30k views.

    Sorry I didn't mean it like that. If I came off as egotistical, I didn't mean to. I've heard that the reader base here is pretty casual and my definition of casual is just people reading for a story that doesn't have much meaning beyond what's on the surface. By that I mean that a story can be...
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    Released a new chapter an got 30k views.

    Jesus christ I've only been writing it for 2 months but my story already has 39 chapters and 30k views. I didn't think I'd actually get that much so quickly. I have to admit, it's kind of mind boggling that 30k people looked at my story. Not exactly read it cause probably less than half of that...
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    time to write 2000 words

    For me, an hour and a half. Of course thats considering I'm in all the optimal conditions. Distractions are at the back of my mind. A nice tune is playing in my ears, helping my brain conjure a scene. And the only thing I can think of is getting this project done. Then I remember I have to...
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    Recruiting

    I just got into the discord. I'mma use this as an opportunity to practice fight scenes. If its only one chapter a month, I can do it alongside my other stuff. So I'm down.
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    Anybody here have a favorite character form their story that's not the protagonist?

    Definitely Harmony, the succubus that lives with the MC. She has to be one of the most complex characters I've written yet, which some people probably won't know until much later. And I mean much later. So much later that its probably going to be a few months until her story gets in the depths...
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    Would like some feedback please.

    Oh no, I'm not taking it as too negative, more of just trying to explain the decisions I've made. I hate those types of stories where the MC gets everything he wants and is rewarded for terrible behavior. In fact, the main reason Ty exists is to offer a type of callout on those behaviors while...
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    Would like some feedback please.

    Yeah I do have a problem with switching tenses. It happens unconsciously and its hard for me to point it out to myself. Then I publish it and don't have time to fix it because I'm writing the next chapter. That's kind of the reason for the last sentence in the thread. As for the characters...
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    Sometimes I wonder . . .

    I've read both and had similar experiances of both. Liked the first books. Felt meh on the second. Didn't like the third. I hated Maze Runners third book even more than Hunger Games third book cause a least Hunger Game's ended interestingly while keeping character actions somewhat consistent. I...
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    What things are you afraid of?

    anything that remotely looks like a bee or wasp. Fuck them. I don't care about their "honey" or "be good to flowers and helping them pollinate." Fuck 'em. Kill them all.
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    Would like some feedback please.

    I've already asked about the first chapters of my story, but I would like to know what people think later on than just the first three or four chapters. I want to know if I'm getting better with my writing as I continue the story. I'm not just going to ask this in this thread, but I'm also going...
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    The most despicable deity?

    What's ironic is the least assholey god from that pantheon is Hades, the god of the underworld. Like, he still did some asshole stuff, but out of all the other gods, he's probably the best of them all.
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    I am God!

    I would probably just give me all the moneys. Sadness may suck, but its nothing that a good ps5 can't fix. For a few days. Then it gets boring. And I hide away all my grievances by throwing cash around. Goddammit.
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    What's the highest view you get in a day?

    The highest I've gotten is 944. Otherwise I average around 400-500 views per day.
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    Do you actually enjoy your writing?

    I love seeing what I'm writing, as in the actual story itself, but the actual writing itself isn't the best. I have trouble with past and present tense and I accidentally switch between the two a lot when I shouldn't Otherwise, I like what I'm doing.
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    Pick a power but the next person to reply chooses a drawback.

    Drawback: Everything you alter will happen in your generation Power: Able to summon a giant golem to fight for me and do all my chores
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    How do you write a morally questionable character?

    I have a character in my story that is pretty morally questionable and has done, and still does do some things that people wouldn't say is right. Granted, I haven't gotten to that yet, but considering what she does, I highly doubt that people will see her as some type of heroic justice type of...
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    Writing Prompt Describe the girl's feelings/thoughts

    Dad will think twice before he gives sister special treatment.
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    New Chapter is out! Chapter 10 and 3K views milestone!

    It's 3k now but keep it up and it'll be 30k in no time. Congrats!
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    No Thoughts, Head Empty

    I never actually stop getting ideas. When I'm writing a chapter, ideas just rush to me like nothing.
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    How do you rate your naming sense?

    I see a lot of people on this thread struggling on how to come up with names, and worry not, I'm here to help. After all, I have more than a hundred named characters in my head, and I'd say that only 10% of them is lackluster. My most lackluster name is just John Serene which still stands out...
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