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God I hope they don't see my shit. We'd never look at each other the same again.

Well the age of consent may be 14 but most countries will still arrest someone if they send nudes or receive nudes from someone under 18. Japan, for instance, has an age of consent of 13 but sharing nudes with a 13 year old will still get you sent to the slammer.

I posted this, went to sleep, then came back my notifications having a seizure over night. Thanks for the feedback. I will say though that the stuff you pointed out about Ty is great because that tells me that people are picking up on his main character flaw. I wish I could say more, but if I...

Just recently, there's this dude that read my story up to the latest chapter, and he says that he really enjoyed my story. That got my pride up a bit, but I still have yet to get any comments telling me how awful I am. I sure as hell got that immediately on RR with my story getting a 2-star...

This is a topic I usually find myself debating again and again. When should a person differentiate the artist from the art, and when should holding the artist accountable by using the threat of damaging the reputation of the art need to be affected. In this case, as long as the author doesn't...

I just recently turned 18 (birthday is November 13th) and I thought there would be something big. Like this spectacle that'll say, "Congratulations. You're a man now." To put it short nothing like that happened and I was naive to even think that. But in my limited experience of just turning into...

Jokes on you I was planning for my family name to end with me, anyway. Actually that's a win for you now that I think about it.

Head Hopping is fine for me. My series has multiple POV's and I usually head hop, but I only do it when I'm doing a scene transition, when there's a time skip, or if its a new chapter. I also make it pretty obvious who they're following by placing the majority of context clues within the first...

Can someone kill all bees and wasps. I just had an encounter that nearly scarred me for life. I don't care about how good they are for the planet. Fuck em all.

Heres the thing, good music can really elevate a scene. It's even more impactful on the author cause they can visualize the scene in their heads like a movie, and combine that with some nice fitting music, it can make me feel emotional at times. I legit cried when writing one of my scenes...

Here are a few suggestions that came to the top of my head The Core of a Prince Core of a Country King's Core and Might

A few suggestions right here. First off, work on your dialougue. It sounds robotic and not at all human. For example, the first thing the MC says is "I will start doing this sport." Now say that aloud and you'll see what I mean by when it sounds robotic. In fact, I don't think there should be...

It kind of depends on the story. If the story has the type of illegal content and it has no bridge to the original plot, than it can be done and probably make the story better cause why have the illegal stuff without connecting with the overall story. However, most stories if they're at least...

For the story that I'm currently writing: My Succubus Roommate I was inspired by two stories. One was actually a hentai where a succubus lives with the MC and feeds from just his touch rather than any actual sex. That got me to think about other ways the succubus genre could be subverted, which...

I've played 18 hours currently and I only have one Great Rune currently. So basically I have less than 10% of the game actually completed. I've been exploring rather than progressing the story. I knew this was going to be my greatest game of all time when I went to an elevator in the woods and...

From the two months I played it, its a solid 7/10. Pretty interesting and all, but I couldn't go one game without someone calling me shit and reporting me cause I was new. I play smite and haven't touched LoL in nearly a year and I don't plan on playing again.

My chapters are around 2000-3500 words long. But, I accidentally got to much into the zone and made a 8000 word chapter forcing me to split it in 3 parts. Part 3 still has yet to come out, but it actually gave me enough time to write chapters ahead of time.

I honestly don't know. The only thing I can say is just keep writing. If I knew why and how I got that much then Id share how.

Yeah, again I'mma aoplogize for that. I wrote this in a hertbeat after I saw it reach 30k then immediately posted it without rereading. If I did I could have caught how stupid I sound. Like, I'm not saying that casual readers don't understand stuff like that, its just that they would rather read...

Yeah, I'm still surprised how I even got those views in the first place. Seriously, despite me editing for hours, people could still look at my story and think english is my second language when it isn't. I wish I could hire a professional editor, but sadly I'm broke af.