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It depends on the execution. For instance, if I read a rape scene and the first thing that comes to my mind is "I could see Sword Art Online doing this" then your rape scene is shit. If done poorly, at best it can feel unneeded/unwarranted and at worst you're actively romanticizing it. As...

Like is the only thing seperating them their destructive power? Why not expand on it a bit. How about tier 1 only ever does hand combat as in claw and bite strikes, then tier 2 begins using projectiles, tier 3 projectiles are larger than tier 2, tier 4 can actively control the projectiles, and...

Kind of too late for that one, but context is necessary for the situation. Like, I'm dead serious when I say context is necessary for that moment cause trust me when I say that the world I'm creating and the succubi that inhabit it are kind of fucked. And not in the good way. I mean losing...

Thanks. I am a master when it comes to creating weird names.

Basically my first few chapters are a bait and switch. I want it to seem like a pure comedy harem series and then reveal slowly over time about the darkness in the story. I have 30 chapters out now and I've already delved deep into the darkness of my story, but I want some opinions on the start...

I judge people when they say to not do one thing but then they turn right back around and do it themselves. My parents taught me to never associate with people like that, not from word of mouth, but because I notice they're some of the most massive hypocrites I've ever known. So, yeah, my...

Doin pretty swell. How bout you?

Thank you guys for the help.

I may be stupid for asking this but is the banner the cover? I'm one hundred percent stupid.

Basically how do I make it to where people can click on the cover of my story in the sig and it takes them there. I want to be one of the fancy kids.

I don't see anything wrong with that. Carry on.

Oh so one of those. I never really got that mindset. Like its fiction. Even if its evil or some shit its not like its going to affect reality. I hope you create a wonderful story in the future. :blobthumbsup:

These look amazing. Too bad I'm broke and none of them would fit my story. But seriously these look fantastic.

By that I don't mean what inspired you to write your story, but rather what inspired you to write in general. It could either be as a hobby or something but usually there's still some sort of inspiration there to push you forward and put your work out there. Like, for me, I got inspired to...

The only reason I have a harem in my story is because of the subject matter my story goes over. Otherwise they'd be more akin to just a dude with a lot of sex friends and one actual girl he'll pair up with in the end. Or maybe not because my type of stories are ones where they exist to give you...

Both irritate me equally, but if I were to pick one then fluff. At least it doesn't make me cringe.

In that case shameless self promotion here with My Succubus Roommate where the story is much more than the MC getting his dick wet. Honestly, I'm kind of on the verge of changing most of my tags because the actual story ignores about half the tags and genres I have listed.

Okay so I had to rewatch it to remember the context cause its been so long and I nearly balled up when the scene came on. Worse yet, I was watching it on crunchyroll and Re:Zero ads popped up making me realize that I could actually watch something thats good. So here's the context behind it. I...

By that I mean how fast did it take for you to realize that a certain story isn't meant for you, it shows that the writing quality isn't good, or it would be an utterly offensive story that does nothing except make you wonder the IQ of the author. For me, although its an anime, I learned very...

I mean, I don't hate isekai, its just for every Mushoku Tensei or Re:Zero, there's five more Isekai Cheat Magician and In Another World with My Smartphone. Isekai is kind of doing a quality jump recently with slime isekai and that isekai where an assassin is born as a rich dude and is tasked...