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Chapter 1.4 Chapter 5 – The Student Council President, Persia Silverlight Chapter 1.5 Chapter 6 – Enrollment Exam Chapter 1.1 Chapter 2 – The First Person, Lucifer Nightwalker, there's a map in the spoiler right on top. Had been thinking about this ages ago, but, I really have no idea so I...

This novel is 3 years old. You aren't reading the thread, are you? [So... I revised my first chapters of my story] Editing in progress. I got cramps at my fingers from spamming down and delete. Will do.

Will do. I will review in this thread. So one of my arc is like, at least 30k+ words, and every decimal had around 1k words. So how am I supposed to separate them? :unsure:

Thanks a lot. Will be edited. PAINNNNN. I DON'T WANNA EDITTTTT.

More like an arc split into several subchapters, kek. Here's a shortcut if you need it. Prologue

Feedbacks are important. You can't satisfy everyone with your story, but you can get a lot of different opinions from different readers. So... I revised my first chapters of my story, and wanted some feedback or any criticism. Although I did asked for some in some threads, but it takes time for...

Hmm, a fan-fiction. So before I write a review, I'm going to explain about the problems about fan-fiction first. You need to accept the harsh reality about it. You see, fan-fictions, only works very well on fiction that have short stories, and it also works very well if your story is short...

Link, dude. Or you can't put one yet?

Well, I know Tyson is the MC. But isn't Alex the one screaming at Tyson for abandoning his sister? I don't think I've mixed that up. Sure.

Do not ask for feedbacks if your book is less than 3 chapters. Do it after it's more than that so we have a better clue on understanding about your story First, what happened to your cover? Scribble hub, really? I'm not sure about the 'Isekai' tag. Also saw an 'Artificial Intelligence'. If...

Just read three of your chapters, again, a speed read, not because of a random read, but it's because I read very fast. First of all, as usual, let's begin with the title. Search of Tempest. Not bad. Second, genre: Now that's a lot, but congratulations, you nailed most of them. Since there...

There's no point putting a fight scene if one does not know how to fight.

Well if you want to ask for a feedback next time, make sure you put in the inciting stuff first before you ask. Like I wrote, it's an example. There's no need to put it right off the bat. But at least, give hints or include something that would make it look supernatural so that this won't look...

Just read 4 of your chapters. A speed read, actually. So here's the thing I want to ask, what is your work about? First, I would start with the title: Wow, Succubus & Maverick. Second, genre: Supernatural/Mystery. Nothing wrong with that. Third, synopsis: Collin St. Rex is a 17 year-old...

You deleted it?

I'm here to collect different feedbacks. @3guanoff thanks in advance. Genre: Fantasy URL: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/ Feedback...

I can't believe I even drew a map.

https://discord.gg/QQR4gCQD Saw this after two years, lol.

Yes, sometimes, you would get something like a 'Eureka'. You get a really damn good scene in your head. So write down whatever you have. Think and see where it could fit into the story. However, it can't fit into the story just yet, so you save it up for later use. That's how I do it though.

Mine's fantasy, but I rely on logic and balance in power. The greater the power borrowed, the greater the backlash. The stronger the magic, the longer the chant time. But my story is something like telling about how fate could connect people...