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I need a girlfriend like this.

Now here's the problem. It has something to do with the plot, but if I explain too much over those little details, it became an info dump. And another problem is, does story always contains lots of dialogues or conversations? For example, here's a scene I'm working out on: "Alright then...

As a first-person POV author myself, I want to share something. 1. You should perhaps, look around in the forums. Everyone is picky about number the chapters, and you don't have that after revising it. 2. Your synopsis is thematic and atmospheric, but it lacks narrative "teeth." It reads more...

Feels like this.

I'm always bad with descriptions and grammar. Whenever I try to describe something, it always ends up getting too wordy. Usually, I imagine myself in the scene and started to use my six senses, see, hear, smell, touch, taste, think. Is there a simpler way to make sure what you were describing...

1. Yes. 2. 8 years...? 3. First-person POV. Because I want it to be immersive. I want my readers to be inside the story. What I like is to leave small hints behind in every chapter so that when you look back, you can see the connection. I also like to ensure that there are no plot holes in my...

Sometimes I wished I could plant mini bombs into your food disguised as a corn. I enjoyed caving your skull in with my fist while smiling like a sadist. Ramming bike drivers when they are blocking my way and hope they'd disappear forever. Hmm, perhaps I was born evil and suppressing my inner...

When you woke up from a dream and thought: 'Holy crap this is going to be sick' When you shit in the toilet and suddenly had an inspiration When you read manga and watch anime you suddenly had this spark When you read people's story you thought maybe I could try this When you were fed up with...

Third attempt. I'm ordering a deep fry. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/

I think I only hit characters, humor, immersive worldbuilding, romance. There's no harem in my work. Just finish rewriting and scheduling updates. Feel free to have a look. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/211234/the-impossible-fate-that-leads-to-a-god-of-a-new-world/

Wanted to prove I'm still alive.

Link expired. Let me join. But I won't be active most of the time because I had work to do.

Hello, the madman here. Went silent for a few months and now I pop back, always bringing back a better quality of my story. I always find myself having a hard time to fish your eyeballs. I noticed a few things whenever a new author pops up and they needed feedback. Readers in SH always...

Decided to pick up my pen again.

Hey, I always give honest critique. Because I can't stand those who gave superficial ones. Anyways, let's go to your synopsis. 1. Lack of Clarity and Overuse of Abstract Language: "It’s all too vague." The synopsis leans heavily on philosophical language and abstract ideas without clearly...

Burnout years ago. Made lots of notes and decided to put them aside. Would sometimes check on them and see whether I could use it in my work.

In my story, I had: 1. Magic - or magic spells, a supernatural power to bend the laws of nature. Through consuming a form of energy called mana. There are three methods to activate. i. Chants. (Creation. Had a specific language that brings out the most mana conversion rate to output) ii...

Crap, this didn't work well huh. Thank you for your review. I will continue to polish my work.