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What about "Daddy Did Me" and "Daddy Do ... no, not YOU Puff Daddy, that Daddy! Do Me!"

Ketchup the condiment, Ketchup the raccoon, or both?

Sorry to intrude here but ... I take it English is not your native language? There are some odd word choice and grammar issues in the synopsis that make me, personally, reluctant to even try the first chapter, unless I know you are writing in an unfamiliar language.

Payola. Bribe them to read. Otherwise, hit 20, then 50 chapters, and use popular tags (correctly - NOTHING annoys readers more than incorrect tags). And yes, Smut IS one of the popular tags, as are Gender Bender, Girl's Love and a few dozen others.

I find watching porn annoying - either there's no plot at all and it gets real old real fast for me, or there is an attempt at a plot, that suddenly grinds to a halt for the sex scene, and, just as the sex scene starts getting good, the plot intrudes. Just a bunch of speed bumps. In written...

I haven't read any harem stories myself - but if I heard more were like this, I MIGHT. Probably wouldn't but might (i.e. would go in the "Probably Won't Read, But Curious" category on my Reading List, instead of the "May eventually read" one most stuff goes in).

When I was doing nothing but filling out job applications and driving my wife around to her home care nursing assignments, I had a lot of free time and put out a few thousand words a day. But that didn't last long and now I'm lucky to hit 1000. If I was making money with it, I might be able to...

I've had writers and fans of erotica go off on this (pun fully intended) - erotica can BE porn, but porn is not erotica and erotica does not have to be porn. And, no, I'm not quite sure of the difference, even after they explained it, but there is one. That's the fun part!

As an aside, the use of the word "slave" May be problematic - PocketFM, for example, does not approve of it in the text (yet has "Shadow Slave" as an available audio series, go figure), and some sites may ban the ad for using it. "Servant," while a much weaker word, is less likely to ruffle...

Not completely sure what you are asking here. Context is "what happens around the central point or character" for the most part; it is what the reader uses (if the author did their job well) to make sense of the story itself and the characters involved (and should somewhat govern the...

The lines just end and then there's a blank space before the next one - even if a sentence is continuing. And there are no "" or '' or <> marks around dialogue to denote that it is dialogue, so everything just comes out like stream of consciousness narration,

Most of the successful experiments with this that I've seen were marketing attempts tied to something else (IIRC the TV series Lost used a story like this as promotional material at one point)- though the very first one I ever heard of was a Halloween horror story, that I literally found out...

Had one contact me. When I finally got a link to their portfolio, the story they contacted me about was the WORST match to their style of anything I had up on the site! If I had money to spare and had posted my romance novel, I might have considered trying to work out a deal with them, but...

Grr, you're right - and I even used to have a Blood Bowl team dedicated to Khorne.

Slaanesh - daemon god of sensual pleasure and temptation, one of the three main Chaos Gods (alongside Tzeentch, the Changer of Ways and Nurgle, the Rotlord) of the Warhammer and Warhammer 40,000 settings.

As someone stuck with "chicken scratch" or "chicken scratch connected by curves" since age five, I'm afraid I can't help you.

The formatting is ... odd. Feels like it wants to be a poem, not prose. Kind of akin to Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, and Alice's Adventures through the Looking Glass and What She Found There but... Those are told in third person so we can feel the craziness alongside her, without seeing...

As resident Contrarian, I'd be more prone to go with something like: LVL 1 BLUEPRINTS UNLOCKED: WOODEN items: SPEAR; HAMMER; CLUB, BOW, ARROW, DAGGER, SHIELD STONE items: SPEAR, AXE, HAMMER, ARROW, DAGGER As an aside, crafting bow and arrows are usually a very different skill from melee...

Only read the first chapter but have to say: It does feel a little robotic - perhaps due to the influence of The Butler (i.e. AI), as it does well with the technical side of things, but does not HAVE feelings, so can't really get them across. Feelings are messy, and make people do things like...

Depends - is your god Slaanesh perhaps?