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Hey, I'm Dawn Moon and I'm in my late 20's. I like to writing about paranormal, mystery, action, adventure, alt history, fantasy, sci-fi, and Lgbtqia topics. Currently, my story has 16 chapters out and I would love some feedback...

I learned that lots of people write about a succubus, specifically

Hello, Tempokai! I've been seeing this thread a lot and it's hilarious and insightful. Please roast my story. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1716414/the-maverick-and-the-succubus-litrpg/

Let me know what you think?

Mostly: LitRPG ( Other tags: Drama, Supernatural, Adventure, School Life, Mystery, Sports, Lgbt, and Martial Arts ) https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1422958/the-succubus-and-the-maverick-litrpg/

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1422958/the-succubus-and-the-maverick-litrpg/

I'm more of a traditional writer, but I'm learning to write webnovels

I hope you enjoy

Feedback is always good and I know you can't appease everyone https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1716414/the-succubus-and-the-maverick-litrpg/

Whoever gave me likes on my story, thank you ❤️

Than can I ask you a question? I have a chapter that's a future event and I decided to make it chapter 1 instead of a prologue. It's not super long though Should I keep it chapter 1 or rename it?

Hi Are prologues good or bad? I know people have a love-hate relationship with them, but I just wanna know some opinions. Do people skip prologues?

Yes, I had no idea it would be this different and I'm sorry for my lack of knowledge. But thanks for being very kind and helpful. The problems with be addressed and I'll make sure to improve

Oh, it's more like he's given his powers. Besides supernatural/mystery it's also a LitRPG. I thought putting a fight scene would be better because I get to show the supernatural side and than the mystery will be later when I show the reader how Collin got these powers

Dude, that is pretty awesome! I really appreciate all this

Sorry, do you think I should write a chapter with Collin using his newfound powers in battle and make that first chapter? Than I can show what led up to him getting these powers. Would that be better? Because I do agree with you, Luc

Thank you for the awesome advice! I was told from YouTube videos that the inciting incident should happen early on like Ch5? But I guess I should write more in the synopsis to get the reader hooked. I'm still pretty new to LitRPG and if I wasn't doing that it would definitely be more...

Sorry about that, I wanted some words to stand out. Does that mess up the story? Thx again for reading!

Hello, SH! It's been awhile since I've been on because I was working on different novel projects and crusading through life. Hope everyone is doing well? So, I only have 4 chapters up and it's in a genre I like a lot which is Supernatural/Mystery. But I'm also combining these with the LitRPG...