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Okay, cool! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1422958/the-succubus-and-the-maverick-litrpg/

I have a question. My story is a LitRPG with drama and supernatural elements. Also, my character is bisexual and in a relationship with a guy. That isn't the main focus though, but does that eliminate my story? My word count is also 30k.

I have a LitRPG story if you wanna check it out? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1422958/the-succubus-and-the-maverick-litrpg/

I got a new bookcover for my story and a good synopsis. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1716414/the-maverick-and-the-succubus-litrpg/

Let me know what you think? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1422958/the-succubus-and-the-maverick-litrpg/

I really appreciate the critique to help me improve. But I do have my own little niche that I love and I might take that advice with a grain of salt. Paranormal/Supernatural is my favorite to write about, other genres I'm willing to change a lot and listen more

Thanks for helping me with this problem! Thanks everyone! Your all talented at coming up with a synopsis. This has been a problem for me, putting too much or putting too little information. What's relevant and what's not

So, I took your rewrite and tweaked it. How does this sound? Synopsis: 5 Systems. 5 Royal families. Greetings, Championship. Collin is 17 years-old with a heart of gold and he's the Quarterback on his school's football team. But his easygoing life is flipped upside-down when his older...

That is a pretty interesting rewrite! I might use it. Is that okay? I can't give you credit

Thank you for the advice. I'm not upset, just wanna understand. Thank you.

My current synopsis ain't hitting and I'm trying to improve it. How do you write a Slice of Life-LitRPG story without the Isekai and not make it boring? People are saying the exposition in my first chapter isn't needed. So if I delete chapter one is that better? My MC's gets his system in a...

I have a question. How I make a Slice Of Life-LitRPG interesting right away without Isekai?

So, the synopsis. I'm not sure how to change it or make it better. It doesn't have super high stakes and there's no end of the world drama. Slice Of Life and LitRPG is something I'm still new at. But it does have supernatural elements, my MC will gets his system differently. About the...

Hello, I'm Thorn! So, I still have a lot to learn when it comes to Webnovels and when I decided to write this LitRPG I didn't really have a hook. No end of the world or high stakes and I ruffled a few feathers for not having those aspects. But I didn't wanna make my MC suffer in this story...

I'm gonna complete my LitRPG story and not leave it incomplete ?

Okay! Hey, I'm Thorn. I mostly write supernatural, mystery, sci-fi, alt history, paranormal, Lgbtq, fantasy/urban fantasy, action, and mythology. So, I have a few completed stories but I don't wanna post them on here for reasons like stealing. But if your interested in giving me feedback on...

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Thank you very much, your the best Tempokai! ❤️

Thx for the advice

You might like this, idk. It's supernatural, mystery, slice of life, drama, and LitRPG https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1422958/the-succubus-and-the-maverick-litrpg/