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  1. Cookiez_N_Potionz

    Gabrielle's Creative Corner Cafe!

    Hello and Dear Gabrielle, I would really appreciate if you took a glance at my LitRPG story. Also, I know where I'm lacking and I'm trying to improve. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1716414/the-succubus-and-the-maverick-litrpg/
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    Your very consistent with your uploads and I heard that's good. Unfortunately, that's my problem...

    Your very consistent with your uploads and I heard that's good. Unfortunately, that's my problem since I write pretty slow.
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    I saw your story Fairemont and I think your doing great! You have a decent amount of readership

    I saw your story Fairemont and I think your doing great! You have a decent amount of readership
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    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1716414/the-maverick-and-the-succubus-litrpg/

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1716414/the-maverick-and-the-succubus-litrpg/
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    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    Thank you for the advice. Should I have my character be more upset like yell or break something? Yes, my grammar is kinda wack. But I'm happy you said I improved. Also, should I not mention outfits at all? It is unnecessary?
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    Want feedbacks from an amateur?

    I would appreciate your humble opinion https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1422958/the-succubus-and-the-maverick-litrpg/
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    First Webnovel

    Thank you very much, Vertis! I know I gotta work on my grammar and once I finish the story that will be fixed. And I'll try and work on my character voice and emotion. Yes, those scenes are foreshadowing.
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    First Webnovel

    Hey guys! I was wondering can I get feedback on Chapter 5 and what do you think of the new bookcover? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1422958/the-succubus-and-the-maverick-litrpg/
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    Narration and twists?

    Which is more popular? A straightforward story or a story with lots of twists Does genre also matter?
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    Recommendations A small fish in a big pond

    I have a story that you might like, but idk. My first ever LitRPG https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1422958/the-succubus-and-the-maverick-litrpg/
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    Are my chapters getting better or worse?

    Are you a big fan of first-person or third-person? Hey, I appreciate you giving me a chance because I do wanna improve.
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    Are my chapters getting better or worse?

    So, chapter 1 is unnecessary? Okay, I'll keep that in mind and get rid of that chapter once the story is complete. Btw, I appreciate all your suggestions and I will definitely take them to heart ?
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    Romance or Fantasy?

    Fantasy, but I've wrote a Romance before just to challenge myself and I think I did pretty good.
  14. Cookiez_N_Potionz

    What even is "bad grammar"

    I resonated with this thread because my grammar and transitions are lacking , lol
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    Are my chapters getting better or worse?

    StoneInky, you are pretty cool and insightful. If you can ever find the time to glance at my story again I would appreciate it. But if not that's fine, you were a big help and I might ask for your opinion on other projects of that's okay?
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    Isn't Rick Riordan really popular? What's the issue? He has some good books and if you write...

    Isn't Rick Riordan really popular? What's the issue? He has some good books and if you write similar I think that's awesome.
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    Your favorite genre?

    Well, if you like LitRPG than please check my story out of you have time? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1422958/the-succubus-and-the-maverick-litrpg/ Do you mind checking out my LitRPG story? Not sure if that's your thing though...
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    Hello! Can I get some feedback?

    Right now, I'm writing more chapters but Im not posting them until May. Just wanna know your thoughts on the chapters I have up and how my MC functions as a person. Also, I wanna thank the 20 readers for checking out my story. Your awesome...
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    How Far Ahead Do You Usually Map Your Story Before writing.

    I normally try and write a brief outline about my story, beat for beat. Trying to write decent or compelling dialogue takes me a minute too
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    The Succubus and The Maverick [LitRPG]

    I fixed my Synopsis and I got rid of my prologue. Let me know what you think? Also, can I get some feedback on my last two chapters?
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