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  1. BenJepheneT

    Blunt Feedback Thread [Closed]

    I want to reply with something in equal effort but I can only reflect on my work through your words for the time being. Thanks for the critique, I'll make sure to keep deep mind of it as I write in the future.
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    random stuff

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    What the fuck were they smoking when they wrote that in the script anyway What does an onion mean

    What the fuck were they smoking when they wrote that in the script anyway What does an onion mean
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    you think you can just slip that reference in without me noticing huh, paul? [IMG]

    you think you can just slip that reference in without me noticing huh, paul?
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    Badges for done reviews

    Going back to this, since we're talking about being recognized for reviews here, a latest review list wouldn't be so bad, no? I'm thinking of a layout where both the reviewer's profile AND the reviewed story get put on a list, and people would go check it out. It doesn't prop up frequent...
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    Badges for done reviews

    i can see that in no way WHATSOEVER how people will abuse the SHIT out of this system come on, we all like recognition and all but we got RoyalRoad for that already, and RoyalRoad's reviews, more often than not, come off as an obligation than an actual sincere overview, just because there's a...
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    Blunt Feedback Thread [Closed]

    I'm still fresh into the smut game, so this is news to me. The way I wanted to approach this is by lulling the audience into getting invested in the slice-of-life aspect THROUGH smut, and if they don't like it, at least there's the smut, accessible by the clear-cut (R18) signs I put next to 'em...
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    I am disgusted

    despite not being joke this is the funniest thing being told
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    random stuff

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    Blunt Feedback Thread [Closed]

    I appreciate that you have my shit a shot. Most didn't even last past Chapter 2, so you have my gratitude there. For starters, I'll just ask for some elaborations. Is this an issue of dialogue or personality, or is it just that you didn't find his dilemma to be empathetic enough? No no, that's...
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    Blunt Feedback Thread [Closed]

    As per my usual fashion, I'm doing this scattershot style. I'm giving you 3 of my stories, and like a rougelike dungeon, you get to choose which door to proceed and have yourself horribly mutilated. First door has philosophy, emotional characters, and some semblance of comedy. Caveat is that...
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    Black men twerking be funny™ to me

    Black men twerking be funny™ to me
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    My friend recommended me this game under the pretence that it's "Genshin for men". I thought...

    My friend recommended me this game under the pretence that it's "Genshin for men". I thought Genshin was already made primarily for men but then I checked it out and found out he meant men men.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Good job
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    The Last to Comment Wins

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    Free feedback thread. No Gl or smut, or incest. NO INCEST! (Closed)

    smart move, actually. since you only reviewed up to 10k words, you wouldn't even get past the 2nd chapter if you reviewed Caninstinct.
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    Unreliable Biased Feedback

    aye aye chief. i await my new torn asshole.
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    Your Favorite Mashups?

    Still getting chills from Another Life
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    Free feedback thread. No Gl or smut, or incest. NO INCEST! (Closed)

    I'll give you a two deals. The first one is post-apocalyptic action. The premise is as simple as it gets, should be easy to review. The second is a slow-burn furry drama. Let me reiterate. Furry drama. You neglected to mention this specific niche, so I figured I could slip this in. If you're...
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