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its alright i treat all of the clones as a single hivemind. as far as im concerned, they asked for the review together

not much of a feedback but im known to be generous (humble) is the link with us in the room?

forgot to mention that i liked the intro. the character unlocking her memories from the cinema to the accident. great overall. main thing that kept me reading honestly

is it starter beast? I dont remeber honestly. there's a 10k min because 2 chapters are not enough to make a review. i read them but dont have much to offer. I can tell what youre trying to convey but your grasp on the language berays you. my advice to you is to read more and write more and try...

shes screwing you over. its her and her clones gang

read up to: Chapter 8: Generational Talent writing quality is decent. very translation-esque. but has an ai-smell about it. I suspect you're using ai to edit or polish which i dont really have much of an opinion on. It's not glaringly so. only the first chapter suffers from this otherwise its...

7/20 jew 13/20 hobogoblin no its weird because you have 2 parents and 2 grandparents and this has to be a fraction of 2. 1/2 1/4 etc or maybe this was patched i dunno

its just the 7/20. very odd fraction lol

yeah i can tell bro. ai cover or just stealing a random nerd jp girl will work. boobs will ironically be a bad cover for your novel. despicable. will probably have more readers but despicable regardless. for thr multiple povs, i do not enjoy them at all. the max amount of charctaers i...

read up to: 30. Warning: Consequences this is gonna be a short one because i honestly don't have much to critique. overall, the writing is solid. structure is good, characters feel distinct. this is not my cup of tea but the writing is easy to read so i just kept reading and was honestly...