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hello

we're maxed out on SEA users. i dont know how you escaped the queue. as a staff memeber i gotta put you back. sorry bud

i guess youre right now that i think about it.

this is factually incorrect

if im invested in a story i dont want a new pov introduced halfway trhough. if both are introduced early on then its fine

one label so I know to avoid it

I can fix her

check ur extensions

read reputable works

read up to: 10: Uneasy progress i read this a while ago. It's the 5th most trending novel and 1st in total of number one on trending according to the few months I'm tracking. I was curious as to why. didn't read further than this tho iirc writing is alright. some areas are stronger than others...

wrong alt bro

I only read the first chapter. I'd read more but I'll discuss below why I didn't want to. to start, the writing is good. structure, flow, dialogues are smooth. there are bumps here and there. I'll mention them but they're nit-picky. can be fixed with some editing. the characters are nicely...

close?

Is everyone just going back in line wearing a trenchcoat

awful title name you should be ashamed edit: nvm this was written before that meme came into existence

I'll be honest with you, I dont wanna read this again mainly because I'm bored and wanna see something new. But I skimmed through the first chapter. This feels a lot better in terms of scene structure and flow. It feels dynamic. I like how you used the angel in the first scene. I think it's a...