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thats the opposite of a hook though I'm doing 3 more and will probably take a break

need a comment on here real quick to stop merging plz https://www.scribblehubforum.com/threads/closed-unreliable-biased-feedback-v3.27831/page-9#post-642197

read up to: Arc II Chapter 7 writing quality is decent and it's easy to read which is probably the biggest note i have on this. characters are distinct. at least the mc. I didn't read enough to form an opinion on the party. info dumping was heavy in act one. skimmed most of it. really big turn...

why

reeks of ai. really hard to focus on anything else.

ai has a distinct smell. it's like chocolate covered shit. looks good until you take a bite. for complete ai written stuff with no human direction its really easy. ai cant focus for shit. everything is going everywhere for ai writing guided by humans, the prose is dogshit. a lot of...

hippos

they do it for free

not disappointed since i had no expectations to begin with. i go in blind btw. I dont read synopsises, tags, or prolgues I am not the target audience for your novel. wouldnt have read it if i came across it natrually too. not my preferences. I dont like the mc or the flavor of comedy. I realize...

the sauce must flow

i wished it was an act. if its an act I'd have had hope she'd stop but no i got that its her personality. and i dislike it greatly screen doesn't infer a TV? how do i get to the mana crystal deduction when i get no information on it or the world? she spent hours giggling at them. I get if they...