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  1. Eldoria

    Imagine a fiction that makes you laugh on the surface (because of the absurd comedy), in the...

    Imagine a fiction that makes you laugh on the surface (because of the absurd comedy), in the middle layer (the fictional message) makes you crying (because the scenes contain a relatable moral message), in the hidden layer it makes you shiver (because of the dark psychological thriller twist).
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    Should we reveal infrequent POV shifts?

    Fake Saint of the Year is an example of a light novel that utilizes switching POVs to create dramatic effect, irony, and the comedy of misunderstandings. It's very funny. :blob_melt:
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    "Who is this beautiful witch girl whose gray hair sparkles in the wind? Well, it's me." - Elaina...

    "Who is this beautiful witch girl whose gray hair sparkles in the wind? Well, it's me." - Elaina (Majo no Tabi Tabi)
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    That's not true. I've deleted my status and answers several times because they could potentially...

    That's not true. I've deleted my status and answers several times because they could potentially offend others, regardless of whether they were true or not. You can't please everyone. It's better to just be honest with yourself.
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    Sis... why are you devoting your dedication to me? I can't be active on the forum all the time...

    Sis... why are you devoting your dedication to me? I can't be active on the forum all the time. I have priorities. Do what you like. Ignore my status or answers if they bother you. Regards.:blob_melt:
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    Royal Road Forum Sucks Balls

    The reason I stay here is to interact with fellow writers (and perhaps readers) and discuss creative writing. I'm not against advertising, but when the discussion revolves solely around engagement, metrics, and numbers, it makes me cringe. :blob_pout:
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    Learning the art of entertaining... :blob_melt:

    Learning the art of entertaining... :blob_melt:
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    Distinct voice?

    Design your characters as living characters before narrating them. Every character 'ideally' has a bio: name, appearance, distinctive physical attributes, personality, speaking style, beliefs, dislikes/traumas, age, gender, family background, and relationships. The writer's job is to narrate...
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    How long will your fiction last?

    That's why I want my work published through self-publishing. Not for sales value; but for permanence. Digital data is easily damaged and lost; physical data is more resilient against time. :blob_melt:
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    How to write without heavy repitition of certain pronouns and overstacking descriptions?

    Edit chapters before releasing them. Don't overemphasize the speed of chapter release; consider the narrative quality of the chapter. :blob_melt:
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    Who's The Worst "Male Lead" From A Female MC Novel That You Read?

    I won't name the characters specifically, as I encounter them frequently. I dislike male leads who view women as 'objects.' I dislike female leads who lack personal agency, who are submissive, dictated to, and dependent on others. However, it's purely my personal opinion as a reader. Other...
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    Do you prefer more detail, or less detail when it comes to the environment in a story.

    The environment isn't just a setting; it's the atmosphere of a scene. By using the environment as atmosphere, you can manipulate the reader's mood regarding the situation the characters are facing in a scene. So, they might immerse themselves in the scene. For example, Corpses, blood, broken...
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    Nope. MC isn't a single mother with a cute little daughter. That's not my type of story. :blob_melt:

    Nope. MC isn't a single mother with a cute little daughter. That's not my type of story. :blob_melt:
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    Adventure/Fantasy-story writers, how do you keep travel sequences interesting?

    Follow the adventure premise of your story! Check out Majo no Tabi-Tabi and Frieren for references. Elaina travels from one city to another, following her mother's journey. Meanwhile, Frieren travels back to reminisce about adventures with her friends (most of whom are now deceased).
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    Anyone else struggle to write romance

    There's another possibility: aromantic. This type typically struggles to feel romantically attached to others, has difficulty falling in love, and is more satisfied with planotic relationships (interpersonal relationships based on trust and genuine support). Regardless, I recommend writing what...
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    Which family drama is more interesting?

    What about Akagami no Shank? Akami = red hair.
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    Which family drama is more interesting?

    A white-haired woman gives a white ribbon to her little sister on her 7th birthday. She hugs her big sister cheerfully.
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