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I can tell you that no matter how good your story is, your synopses doesn't leave a good first impression. The first paragraph tells us virtually nothing while name dropping a bunch of fantasy-ish words and names we have no point of reference for. The second paragraph tells us very little as...

Vainqueur: "MINION VICTOR! HOW CAN I MOVE MY ENTIRE HORDE ALL AT ONCE?" Victor: "I can try to make a hot air balloon big enough to carry everything." Vainqueur: (I HAVE THE SMARTEST MINIONS IN THE WORLD! I'M SO PROUD OF THEM FOR HAVING ME AS A MASTER!) side note, but I'll never get tired of the...

It's funny and wholesome in the most backwards way I can imagine. Vainqueur only does anything to either increase his horde or stroke his ego, and he doesn't hide the fact that he looks down on everyone around him, but he also goes out of his way to make sure his minions are happy and taken care...

I'm listening to Vainqueur the Dragon on audible. Vainqueur best dragon.

I'm going into this with the same mindset as when I started writing XNPC. I refused to write a litrpg just because they were possible, and made myself wait until I had an idea I actually wanted to write. Same thing here. I'm only writing it as an isekai because this is a story that needs to be...

I'm trying to avoid spoiling a story I haven't even started writing yet, but they're part of what I meant when I said he has a personal stake in the plot without knowing it.

Sounds like me when the first movie came out. Waaaaay too slow paced for my stupid nine year old badger brain. I tried to write a script for a prequel where the hobbits were the ones who made the One Ring. It was way better than Fellowship because it started with an orc army attacking the Shire...

One of the stories I want to try writing sometime soon is an isekai. I'm hesitant to even try, though, because every time I ask how to write an isekai, people tell me they'll drop the book if the isekaization doesn't happen in the first chapter. Maybe the second if it's really well written. And...

Can you do me a favor, though, and put your answer behind a spoiler in case anyone else wants to solve it?

One of the dungeons my characters go through in XNPC is going to have a puzzle room, and I'd like it to be the kind of puzzle that my readers can solve alongside them if they want to. This is what I've come up with. Would anyone mind trying to solve it? I want to make sure that my logic doesn't...