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  1. TheIcMan

    Check out My Story- The Ascendants: Early Years

    Yknow what, I'm pretty sure I'm just brain-rotted from years of apathy on the internet LMAO. But what @FieryLou said, those sentences in particular feel unnatural and uncanny. Like that last example just isn't something a human would write imo. And this kind of overly positive/flowery language...
  2. TheIcMan

    Check out My Story- The Ascendants: Early Years

    Bros is it over for me? OP's reply looks entirely AI generated...... Edit: I'm like 1000% sure now.. but alas stupidity roams free in my empty head.
  3. TheIcMan

    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    tutel and evil jumpscare :blob_hide:
  4. TheIcMan

    The Iteration series thread!!

    The iteration series obviously!!!! But seriously uh yeah what's that lmao
  5. TheIcMan

    I posted my story, but I think its hidden or something.

    Bro got got by April fools ?
  6. TheIcMan

    Feedback for a slow-updating fiction

    Look. I like self deprecating humor as much as the next guy, but using it while asking for serious feedback is very confusing lmao
  7. TheIcMan

    What are the tropes you like and dislike the most?

    Where’s the option for “Best at Everything, Bad at Nothing”? A.k.a most of isekai?
  8. TheIcMan

    Slighty stupid question about grammar

    There are no stupid questions about grammar because grammar itself is stupid ?
  9. TheIcMan

    What do you think about the novel?

    Okay, for the series title, I guess it’s not bad. Still very generic, but it can work. I like volume 3’s title. Hunting of the goddesses gives a unique vibe and sells what’s to come. Rise of destiny and shadows of power sound like failed Amazon prequels of beloved franchises. In other words...
  10. TheIcMan

    What do you think about the novel?

    Stoneinky pretty much nailed it, but I gotta add my two cents as well. I know we’re trying to stray away from the hyper specific web novel titles, but still let’s not go back to the hyper generic ones. “Last legend rise of destiny” means everything and nothing. There’s nothing to indicate that...
  11. TheIcMan

    News about the Novel Inspired by Solo Leveling(re uploaded)

    Redditor: Read as “ugly, fat, a pervert, hateful, looks at everyone with disdain, and is deeply insecure”.
  12. TheIcMan

    feedback, feedback, feedback.

    Dialogue lookin like MTL’d web novels ?
  13. TheIcMan

    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    The California hate ? from a californian, it’s completely justifiable
  14. TheIcMan

    My mind can be really weird sometimes

    okay holy shit, your original comment is funny as fuck then LMAO
  15. TheIcMan

    I Need Your opinion

    :blob_evil_two:
  16. TheIcMan

    My mind can be really weird sometimes

    P-PROCREATION??
  17. TheIcMan

    Dialogue and paragraph passage thingie

    Share example you have pls
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