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Hey yo hey hey. I'd be willing if you'll have me. 'Cause I've heard about the benefits of having an Accountability/Reading partner. And I've been wanting a critique partner for some time as well (actually for a really long time, but eh) How about it? :D

Whoa, this is actually really interesting! I think I might just have to pick up your book. But, seeing as I'm busy at the moment, I can't :(

A trash can. The legendary beholder of the puppet of unending anger and fury. A puppet of who many of children were taught to fear. Yes, the mage has indeed summoned the all-powerful god: Oscar the Grouch

Oh wow, everyone has really interesting comments about how they've gotten their stories. Meanwhile here's me, still abusing the tactic I've had since I was a kid: Utilizing fanfiction. Ever since I was a kid I'd see a bunch of stories and be like, "that's cool" and then stuff the ideas into my...

Y'know in all honesty, writing in five hundred words sounds way harder than writing two thousand. I personally do go for the 2k threshold, and that usually comes naturally to me. But five hundred? Honestly, that sounds like a skill.

Hey all! To clarify, I wanted to know what people's opinions are on using a "fake name" in the narrative. Say there's a character named Sarah, and she introduces herself to other people as Rah (or whatever I fail at spontaneous names), because she's an incredibly cautious person and only uses...

And if I may, this was probably the most eye-opening advice I've gotten. Thanks sleepingfox! I've made a couple edits, but it's getting pretty late here, so I'll look over the full thing tomorrow.

Thanks so much! Hopefully I can continue putting up this effort and doing more with it. Also I've updated the chapter (only the paragraph breaks, as that's the only thing I have time for, for now). And I'll definitely use the video you've linked me.

Hey guys! Thanks so much for your support! After all this time, and after so many months of writer's block I realized what my main, main problem was (aside from Characterization of course, haha). And that was my desire to go straight to the big picture rather than the smaller. I love stories...

Jesus Christ there's so much! I'm in the middle of class right now, but guys, thanks so much for replying to the post! I have been starved for criticisms like this, and although it does kind of sting, I absolutely see my problems and issues here. So I've decided to do a complete rewrite...

Sorry I didn't read the first part of your post because I just went straight to the points. As for how dedicated am I? I am completely willing to go back and rewrite everything. And I literally mean everything. As I said in the previous post, I've already rewritten the story when it was just...

Thank you so much for your reply! Gosh, I've been really needing someone like you for a while. While this may sound like an excuse, my way of writing is that I'm a write-as-I-go guy. And as this was my first chapter, I didn't know how I was going to start. I myself personally believe that...

Hey everyone! I am really new here to the site (just signed up yesterday :)), and I uploaded my story, The Last Aldrian, as well. I was really nervous doing it, but I've been getting views! So that's pretty exciting. If anyone can, please give me some feedback! I've uploaded the story to...