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  1. Bartun

    Is Using Ai tools for things such as grammar valid or not

    I don't use AI simply because I don't know how to use it. I've been editing my story by myself. Sometimes, I use Grammarly, but even that is not infallible. Tried ProWritingAid, but it sucks. Or maybe I suck at using it. Who knows? In the end, I do it by hand: I guess it's the easier way to...
  2. Bartun

    New blurb for my humble little story

    Greetings, fellow forum-dwellers! It's me! Bartun! Your friendly saurian neighbor! I've been getting criticisms for the blurb of my story, Nowhere to Run, and I wanted to get opinions before changing it. What do you think of this blurb? Nina is a young priestess dreaming of making a name for...
  3. Bartun

    Stories featuring a preteen protagonist

    Not a child, but the protagonist of my story Nowhere to Run is a teenager. I'd love it if you give it a chance.
  4. Bartun

    Are child protagonist a valid genre here?

    Many shonen manga and anime feature child or preteen characters as protagonists, and they are quite popular, so I don't think that's the reason. As someone who also has a teen protagonist, I can relate. But I think that the lack of readers has more to do with the promotion of one's work rather...
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    Hello guys! Hope you are doing great! Chapter 12 of my novel Nowhere to Run has been completely...

    Hello guys! Hope you are doing great! Chapter 12 of my novel Nowhere to Run has been completely rewritten. Added a completely new chase scene and corrected some errors. Now it reads much better! I'll leave the link below if you wish to take a look...
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    Just removed the 'Gore' and 'Sexual Content' warnings from my story Nowhere to Run. They were...

    Just removed the 'Gore' and 'Sexual Content' warnings from my story Nowhere to Run. They were completely unnecessary since there isn't much, and the chapter where there is already has a huge warning. And the Sexual Content wasn't even needed. I just put it because of an attempted grape scene...
  7. Bartun

    If your protagonist lived in the real world, who would she/he be in your life?

    They would be light-years away from me. :blob_pat_sad:
  8. Bartun

    How frequently do you worry about damage to your eye(s)?

    I work in metalworking, so I always worry about my eyes
  9. Bartun

    [Need suggestions] The 7 wonders of early 21st century's gaming industry

    Most of my suggestions are already quite old, but if you are looking for wonders of the early 21st century, I would dare to suggest: Vietcong 1 (2003): The most realistic jungle in a video game thus far, and the most challenging and immersive FPS of its time. You had to evade boobytraps and...
  10. Bartun

    Suggestions please

    I would love to recommend my novel Nowhere to Run. It's a fantasy story with mystery and action. ?
  11. Bartun

    How does your story compare to The Eye of Argon?

    I have no idea, but I'm just a dino trying his best.
  12. Bartun

    Day one of learning how to draw

    Carry on!
  13. Bartun

    @Duck_Norris just like you, friend :blob_wink:

    @Duck_Norris just like you, friend :blob_wink:
  14. Bartun

    @SirContro actually, I'm a bird, not a lizard ?

    @SirContro actually, I'm a bird, not a lizard ?
  15. Bartun

    @Alfir thank you so much!

    @Alfir thank you so much!
  16. Bartun

    @NotaNuffian that was when I was young and fit :blob_sweat:

    @NotaNuffian that was when I was young and fit :blob_sweat:
  17. Bartun

    @Navillus thank you!

    @Navillus thank you!
  18. Bartun

    Me when not wearing glasses! :blob_happy:

    Me when not wearing glasses! :blob_happy:
  19. Bartun

    Happy Birthday! Hope you have a fantastic day!

    Happy Birthday! Hope you have a fantastic day!
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