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  1. Bartun

    I explore it a bit in my story. The MC is deeply hurt by the death of her mentor and is shocked...

    I explore it a bit in my story. The MC is deeply hurt by the death of her mentor and is shocked that his kin actually celebrates him and others as they died with honor in their eyes.
  2. Bartun

    Crying MCs?

    My MC cries a lot. I think it's only natural.
  3. Bartun

    In my not so humble opinion: get feedback, no harems

    This sounds interesting! I would love to hear your thoughts about my story! Genre: Fantasy Action/Adventure URL: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/283095/nowhere-to-run/ Feedback Level: Level 1 Other: It starts slow. The chapters are pretty long. Female MC is underage (just coming of age...
  4. Bartun

    Fantasy?

    I hope so. I would love it if more people read my story ?
  5. Bartun

    Good luck!

    Good luck!
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