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  1. Bartun

    When Blocking Isn’t Enough: How Do You Handle Cyberbullying & Doxxing? (A Support Forum)

    Never been cyberbullied, but I've been doxxed once. I didn't really care since it's not like people care about a dinosaur living in the third world.
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    Funny bits with your novel + family

    Nobody in my family knows I write, only my brother, who also writes.
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    Why don’t the monsters in your world attack cities often?

    Because humans hunted them down to almost extinction :cry:
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    Hi guys! Hope you are doing well! Chapter 10 of my novel Nowhere to Run has been completely...

    Hi guys! Hope you are doing well! Chapter 10 of my novel Nowhere to Run has been completely rewritten! I cropped more than 500 words of it, and now it is more streamlined. I'll leave the link below in case you wish to take a look. I hope you like it...
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    Thank you all!

    Thank you all!
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    Hi guys! I've been wondering. Do any of you know how Honeyfeed is? I just realized I had...

    Hi guys! I've been wondering. Do any of you know how Honeyfeed is? I just realized I had created an account a while back, and I was thinking about uploading my novel there too. ?
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    Happy Birthday! Hope you have an awesome day!

    Happy Birthday! Hope you have an awesome day!
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    I have trouble with hooks and currently open to feedback swaps.

    Man, I did not expect you to give me any feedback. Thanks! I will look at yours too when I have a bit of time.
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    Way to go!

    Way to go!
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    Veilguard wins GOTY

    And I thought my dialogue was bad :cry:
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    The last time I've heard someone said that a freaking meteorite fell over our heads :s_frown:

    The last time I've heard someone said that a freaking meteorite fell over our heads :s_frown:
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    Was reading some blurbs from the trending list, and wtf?

    And they said my blurt was bad ?
  13. Bartun

    Are Slow Starts Too Boring?sl

    I hope not, my story starts slow too :cry:
  14. Bartun

    Artfight 2025

    Nice!
  15. Bartun

    Symbolism and motif questions for everyone.

    Symbolism in my novel is so profound that people can't find it. :blob_sweat:
  16. Bartun

    I have trouble with hooks and currently open to feedback swaps.

    Don't worry! Take your time! And I've noticed the text issue is fixed on the 3rd chapter, but still shows on half of the 2nd.
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    I have trouble with hooks and currently open to feedback swaps.

    Carry on, fellow writer! Just wanted to point out that in part of the second chapter and the entirety of the third one, the text is really dark and difficult to read. This is evident when using dark mode; in light mode, there aren't any issues, but you might want to check it. Maybe is just a...
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    Disgustingly easy cheat code to fix a (narratively) bland character

    And stupid me wasting time trying to make them deep and realistic ?
  19. Bartun

    How would you feel?

    It could be like in Watchmen, where the villain sacrificed millions to save billions. Still questionable, but ultimately for the better. And I'm no goblin :cry:
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    How would you feel?

    Honestly, it could work.
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