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  1. Bartun

    What do you think about Loli?

    Lolis are cute. Gotta protect them at all costs.
  2. Bartun

    I'm Back on Youtube

    Welcome back!
  3. Bartun

    Annoying, Unsolicited Advertisement of Services

    Never got any of those. Guess I'm lucky... or I'm eternally alone. :s_frown:
  4. Bartun

    Happy belated birthday! It sounds like you had fun!

    Happy belated birthday! It sounds like you had fun!
  5. Bartun

    Another Milestone To Celebrate! ?

    Way to go! Congratulations!
  6. Bartun

    I'm on a once in a while, criticism spree

    Wow! Thank you so much! This didn't feel like a fry at all. If anything, it gives me a good direction for fixing the chapter. And sorry. I guess I got carried away and didn't read that part.
  7. Bartun

    Should I continue writing?

    No problem! Glad to be of help! :blob_okay:
  8. Bartun

    Can another author explain to me why so many stories don't use paragraphs?

    My story is heavy with dialogue, and people would get lost if I didn't put dialogue tags ?
  9. Bartun

    Should I continue writing?

    All I can say is don't give up. Even if you write just for you, you are putting your heart into it, and if you put your heart into it, then it is good for you. I would hate it if I stopped doing something that is good for me.
  10. Bartun

    What is the opposite of your personality?

    I guess the opposite version of me wouldn't care less about anything, because I care too much for everything.
  11. Bartun

    I'm on a once in a while, criticism spree

    Hello! You already gave me good suggestions for my blurb, but then I saw this post. I would love it if you would take a look at my novel Nowhere to Run. I've been rewriting it for quite a while now since I finished it, and already taken into account previous criticism, but I'm always striving...
  12. Bartun

    New blurb for my humble little story

    This is deep! Thank you for the suggestions! And no, I didn't know the difference between a blurb and a synopsis. Thanks for pointing that out! And yeah, I missed the typo. I wrote it in Notepad, so I didn't see the red line. I need to rephrase it. Again, thank you so much for the help!
  13. Bartun

    Hans' Advice for Budding Illustrators in ScribbleHub

    You guys are getting unsolicited emails? I don't get even those :cry:
  14. Bartun

    Way to go! Congratulations!

    Way to go! Congratulations!
  15. Bartun

    Congratulations Paul! Best Wishes!

    Congratulations Paul! Best Wishes!
  16. Bartun

    New blurb for my humble little story

    That's a good question! I need to tweak it a bit.
  17. Bartun

    Which story of yours is probably the most suitable to have video game adaptation

    I think every single writer here has dreamed about their stories being either an anime/movie/series, a video game, or both.
  18. Bartun

    Remake your old fictions?!

    I'm rewriting my novel to improve its quality, not to follow a trend or anything. I've been improving a lot, and the difference between my first chapter and my last is just too big. Gotta edit all chapters to the same standard before I start writing a new book.
  19. Bartun

    ln desperate need of feedback

    Hey! Just wanted to let you know, in the chapter 'The Rescue', the text is difficult to read in Dark Mode. It reads just fine in the Default mode, so it might be just a formatting issue.
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