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Today I learned two new things. Interesting.

"The slime bounces around you. It's a fleshlight, glowing in the dark." Or something like that. ...The description was written down, too, so I was confused and everyone else was just awkwardly looking at me(?) But why is it called a light if it isn't a light? Weird, no?

Today, I learned that a fleshlight is not a flashlight made of flesh. ...I used this word in our dnd session without knowing what it was. That was embarrassing.

Name and feel are all that matters in a novel. Long character descriptions are boring. So don't worry.

I mean, that looks good? Gives me an image of a blonde rich girl immediately. Since you emphathize shiny jewelry, I imagine she has the big fancy stuff, too. Paragraphs of exposition about every curve in a character's body is bad writing. But you aren't doing that. You are doing very well...

Yes. Gimme hug... :blob_teary:

I do not read sci-fi, (it's a genre I think better suits a visual medium), but the synopsis looks pretty good. You establish the setting, the protagonist, and what the story is going to be about. And whole new type of cancer? What is it? You have a hook. It does feel rough, but I think you...