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...Okay, this is war. What do you mean about the MC not being important? Even if you plan to make him more of an observer, the MC is the MC! What about a more detached personality? A dude who wants to die, cursed to wake up in different worlds, slowly regaining emotions and happiness, and...

His name is Aiden Rourke? Do we have already chosen settings for him, or do we continue off from the previous person? And his name sounds American. Is he American? Personality? Looks? I hate inconsistency. I think we should add another setting. Either we all try to unify his tone, or his tone...

Hello! Sure! Thanks for tagging! I don't care about views or whatever, it just sounds funnnnnn! :blob_cookie: So like, who's first? And details about the protag? I need details.

...It was just a suggestion. I do not like this sort of risque humor, I am just offering ideas to improve your novel.

@PageTurner, I'll also add this. I'm better at dry, dark wit, and I don't really like absurd humor. But I still think it would work better in this scenario, or at least a more absurd dialogue. Right now it feels like middle schoolers talking. So what would be funny is if an announcer just...

...Yep, I rechecked, and I was supposed to review 'The First Page', and only lightly view this one. But I mixed things up, cuz of course I did. Damnit. Dunno what to do now. I don't want to delete it, tho.

I was completely confused. I thought this was 'The First Page', and I was reviewing that novel at the same time, so I got the pages mixed up and...whatever. Let's just start, lmao. First Impression: If your novel is a comedy, you have to make it sound like it. I know this may sound difficult...

First Impression: I like the synopsis, tells me everything I need to know. It reads a tad rough, but not to the point it will put off readers. Maybe space it into more paragraphs to make it more readable. I'll add some extra advice: it's best not to try for a series if this is your first...

@Macha has summomed me! But I am lazy today, so I shall sleep for now. Tomorrow I will run things through an AI checker and if results turn up negative, I will review your novel! Yay!

Neurotypicals apparently do not eat every bite of food in an order ranked from least to most delicious. I thought that was what 'save the best bits for last' meant.