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  1. StoneInky

    Guys! I've got an idea!

    ...Okay, this is war. What do you mean about the MC not being important? Even if you plan to make him more of an observer, the MC is the MC! What about a more detached personality? A dude who wants to die, cursed to wake up in different worlds, slowly regaining emotions and happiness, and...
  2. StoneInky

    Guys! I've got an idea!

    His name is Aiden Rourke? Do we have already chosen settings for him, or do we continue off from the previous person? And his name sounds American. Is he American? Personality? Looks? I hate inconsistency. I think we should add another setting. Either we all try to unify his tone, or his tone...
  3. StoneInky

    Guys! I've got an idea!

    Hello! Sure! Thanks for tagging! I don't care about views or whatever, it just sounds funnnnnn! :blob_cookie: So like, who's first? And details about the protag? I need details.
  4. StoneInky

    Even for images, doesn't work if you need several of the same character, or anything specific or...

    Even for images, doesn't work if you need several of the same character, or anything specific or consistent.
  5. StoneInky

    Eh, I... hm... I'm wondering whether to throw away my dignity or not.

    Eh, I... hm... I'm wondering whether to throw away my dignity or not.
  6. StoneInky

    Is This Good Humour?

    ...It was just a suggestion. I do not like this sort of risque humor, I am just offering ideas to improve your novel.
  7. StoneInky

    Is This Good Humour?

    @PageTurner, I'll also add this. I'm better at dry, dark wit, and I don't really like absurd humor. But I still think it would work better in this scenario, or at least a more absurd dialogue. Right now it feels like middle schoolers talking. So what would be funny is if an announcer just...
  8. StoneInky

    Is This Good Humour?

    ...Yep, I rechecked, and I was supposed to review 'The First Page', and only lightly view this one. But I mixed things up, cuz of course I did. Damnit. Dunno what to do now. I don't want to delete it, tho.
  9. StoneInky

    Is This Good Humour?

    I was completely confused. I thought this was 'The First Page', and I was reviewing that novel at the same time, so I got the pages mixed up and...whatever. Let's just start, lmao. First Impression: If your novel is a comedy, you have to make it sound like it. I know this may sound difficult...
  10. StoneInky

    My first Lightnovel: The Apartment that eats Feelings

    First Impression: I like the synopsis, tells me everything I need to know. It reads a tad rough, but not to the point it will put off readers. Maybe space it into more paragraphs to make it more readable. I'll add some extra advice: it's best not to try for a series if this is your first...
  11. StoneInky

    Is it Sci-fi? Urgh... I'll at least try the first chapter and see what I can do.

    Is it Sci-fi? Urgh... I'll at least try the first chapter and see what I can do.
  12. StoneInky

    And no slang!

    And no slang!
  13. StoneInky

    I know it is not perfect...but Tanya makes up for it alone.

    I know it is not perfect...but Tanya makes up for it alone.
  14. StoneInky

    I was underage a few months ago, lmao. Just stuff about fav underage chara.

    I was underage a few months ago, lmao. Just stuff about fav underage chara.
  15. StoneInky

    Lmaooooo. I'm on mobile rn, so I'll read it later, but you can also add generic metaphors?

    Lmaooooo. I'm on mobile rn, so I'll read it later, but you can also add generic metaphors?
  16. StoneInky

    What happens if I am? Just curious.

    What happens if I am? Just curious.
  17. StoneInky

    Whattya thinking about?

    Whattya thinking about?
  18. StoneInky

    Eh, fair points. Eat it with the opposite order, then. Tastes nice too.

    Eh, fair points. Eat it with the opposite order, then. Tastes nice too.
  19. StoneInky

    The Last Page [4000 words] [Short Story] [Slice of Life]

    @Macha has summomed me! But I am lazy today, so I shall sleep for now. Tomorrow I will run things through an AI checker and if results turn up negative, I will review your novel! Yay!
  20. StoneInky

    Neurotypicals apparently do not eat every bite of food in an order ranked from least to most...

    Neurotypicals apparently do not eat every bite of food in an order ranked from least to most delicious. I thought that was what 'save the best bits for last' meant.
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