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  1. StoneInky

    What even is "bad grammar"

    Remember that this only applies to informal situations. Situations like writing a novel? If readers complain about the grammar, THIS IS NOT THE REASON.
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    Getting to know each other.

    She means someone who loves community.
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    Drink @Macha. But the one with a Tea. Or the one that is T.

    Drink @Macha. But the one with a Tea. Or the one that is T.
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    Getting to know each other.

    Machaaaaa... That's your introduction to this guy? Lmao.
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    Dwarves as the Antagonists?

    Exactlyyyyy. Cool creation story right there. Not just simple ale-loving, blacksmithing folk. But I agree. Elves should be taller than humans, at least. Short elves? What short elves? Fires blowtorch and smiles innocently.
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    Dwarves as the Antagonists?

    Doesn't matter. Even the smaller elves are cute. Dwarves... tch. Except for the Dvergar version, and even then I prefer the Alf.
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    What even is "bad grammar"

    tToo few grammmer ,mestakes you want
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    Dwarves as the Antagonists?

    I've always hated dwarves. Elf supremecy. But hm... I haven't seen any, no. I think I've seen one where they turn into stone when sunlight hits em, but I don't remember the title.
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    What even is "bad grammar"

    1. Use Grammarly. That'll help with periods, mispelling, and forgotten capitals. Most of the stuff that qualifies as grammar. 2. Tense. Check to make sure your verbs are the correct tense and form. Check your adjectives too. 3. Use the right words that make sense within the sentence. Do not make...
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    How many people have had a lasting impression on you, meaning someone you think about at least once a year even if you don’t see them?

    Oh. You meant here. Not like, irl. That makes more sense. I have a couple of authors who wrote novels I loved. Even drew fanart.
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    A bit of advice

    Oh yeah, I felt this pretty bad. Some readers are obviously just not here for feedback. Especially the ones that demand you read their whole story before reviewing. Claiming it 'picks up' later. Well, 1. It doesn't matter, cuz readers will not read Chapter 2 if Chapter 1 is bad. And 2. Humans...
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    ? Dunno what that is, but ok. I don't read there anyway. And most good authors double post on...

    ? Dunno what that is, but ok. I don't read there anyway. And most good authors double post on there and Scribblehub.
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    Ohhh. That explains it. The whole structure of the novel is actually very good, the issues are...

    Ohhh. That explains it. The whole structure of the novel is actually very good, the issues are not glaring, so I was wondering that.
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    The Last Page [4000 words] [Short Story] [Slice of Life]

    Accidently reviewed the other novel instead of this one. Sighhhh. I'll just review both. Remember to thank me. /jk First Impressions: A very short synopsis! I do like how it tells me many important things; the protagonist, simple info on the background, the atmosphere, etc. But you still...
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    Synopsis is awesome. In chapter one, the exposition at the start was a tad draggy. Later we got...

    Synopsis is awesome. In chapter one, the exposition at the start was a tad draggy. Later we got tons of action, and I liked that. The atmosphere of the battleground changing as the guy appears was abrupt. And I am curious if this is the new world or the isekai'ed setting right now? That is all...
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    Well, it's gonna be our project, right? :blob_cookie:

    Well, it's gonna be our project, right? :blob_cookie:
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    Guys! I've got an idea!

    Oh... ok. Yeah, that's Whitefeather, Daydreamers, me, Matcha, Justthetip(?) Okay, and um, two more? No making a conversation thread where we can talk about the story? We at least have to agree on the general length we want the chapters to be, right? And call dibs on the world settings? I think...
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    Guys! I've got an idea!

    Couldn't view the cover for some reason, so I'm posting it in hopes it works. Edit: It works! But the dude is just... a shadow...
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    Decided. It's not worth it.

    Decided. It's not worth it.
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    Guysss anyone wanna join our project...

    Guysss anyone wanna join our project? https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/guys-ive-got-an-idea.22899/#post-527602
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