An example of a review from an editor posing as a casual reader.
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An example of a review from an editor posing as a casual reader.
I thank an admin for finally removing one of the 'weird fiction' recommendations on my fiction page. Now... I can look at my fiction homepage without feeling weird about seeing it in a similar series.
What do you think about the combination of these 3 genres in 1 work: dark fantasy + psychological + tragedy?
You’ve been pouting a lot lately. Must be tough being a magical girl.
Have you ever heard of Magical Girl Minky Momo?
I didn't realize that was possible.
Is disembowel something like vowel? Or is it meant to be pronounced ‘dish em bowl’?
It's sunday. It's time for a bath.
Hmm... I just realized my writing style tends to be atmospheric, simbolic and emotional. That's why I find it difficult to write comedy scenes that are purely entertaining.
TADAAAAA
kith?
To anyone who claims to be asking for honest feedback, please be honest with yourself.
Don't say you're asking for feedback if you don't even appreciate the reviewer's time and thought for your work. Reviewers are human beings, too, and ignoring them as if they don't exist will only hurt them.
New member~
You know... why the sky rains when a character cries over the loss of a loved one. Or how the wind often ruffles characters' hair when they're indecisive (just look at the Pain vs. Naruto scene about the cycle of hatred). It's a dramatization technique of showing emotion through atmosphere.
The sky was crying...
Hmm... maybe I'll write an autobiography titled, "Eldoria: Journey of the Immortal Magical Girl".
*Pats kitty.*
Is this a coincidence? I read two fictions in the feedback section... and found a weakness in the narrative structure related to characterization.
Some characters were difficult to distinguish without name tags. They lacked identity, personality, and unique voices.
They were more like plot devices than living characters.
Maybe I should make a thread about characterization next time.
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