When the author (narrator) disappears from the narrative... leaving only the breathing text, there is no longer any barrier between the reader and the character. So, you can feel the character' breath in your mind.
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Just so you know, I wasn't calling you out on humblebragging; that other fella who we responded to had that vibe.
Oops... SH database error again. I need to back up my fictions.
One voluntary review or feedback from someone who truly cares about your fiction is a true trophy. Why?
Because someone sees your work and acknowledges it honestly and sincerely. You are seen as a wordsmith who impresses the reader.
And that's worth more than 1,000 empty compliments or 100 cosmetic reviews.
After eating, I'm sleepy...
After taking a shower, I'm sleepy...
Maybe I should— 
eldoria? Rec me a chapter in blood princess where its the violent chapter, that you;re happy with how it came out. I'm interested in how you juxtapose the sweet mommy against what she's like wreaking wrath.
Wow... I just realized that reactions are interchangeable. If you run out of reactions, you can undo (or borrow) a reaction from a previous answer or comment and then react to another answer or comment.
Does this mean that reactions have a central bank as a custodian of value to prevent inflation? Perhaps reactions are the currency of the SHF.
Show it, don't tell it is a simple writing principle, but it's complicated in practice.
If the narrative is too showy, the pacing may slow. If the narrative is too telling, the reader's emotions can become cold or even numb.
Did you just get your daily reacts quota back? So it resets at 06.00 GMT+8.
I just realized... reactions can run out.
To anyone who has replied to my message and I haven't had a chance to respond, I'm sorry. I'm out of reactions.
I want an AIldoria assistant app~.
What if one day your childhood friend suddenly appears and 'wants to save you' from your current self (who is cold after being hit by the harshness of life) by demanding that you return to being the person who used to know as a kind, gentle and friendly person. How would you feel and respond?
I want to write again but the cold makes me to become a sleeping beauty....?
It's easier to complain and vent your frustrations on others than to address the root of the problem.
If you hate AI art, then sue giant companies like Grok for freely providing AI art... instead of blaming niche authors who write for fun and don't make a dime from their writing.
I love dark fantasy... not because I like darkness. But it allows us to explore sides of humanity that's often hidden.
Furthermore, by contrasting the darkness of the world with humanity, we (readers) can better appreciate peace.
"Humans will never understand each other until they share the same suffering." - Pain (Uzumaki Nagato).
The city turns into a sea of flames
You sleep about as much as I do, you know that?
Eldoria of the lake, how is your day?
After 7 months, my fiction on SH finally has a recommendation in Similar Series, despite being recommended on my other fiction pages.
Well, that's not bad, because my fiction is so subversive that a suitable recommendation candidate can only be found in the prequel series. -
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