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  • Eldoria
    I love dark fantasy... not because I like darkness. But it allows us to explore sides of humanity that's often hidden.

    Furthermore, by contrasting the darkness of the world with humanity, we (readers) can better appreciate peace.

    "Humans will never understand each other until they share the same suffering." - Pain (Uzumaki Nagato).
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    Omarfaruq
    Omarfaruq
    It's called empathy for a min after that you will forget about it.
    Eldoria
    Eldoria
    Well, morality isn't built overnight... the author simply provides one medium for empathy through fiction. The rest is left to family, education, culture, and religion.
    TinaMigarlo
    TinaMigarlo
    I like dark imagery in movies, books amnd music. I also enjoy delicate beauty, but I like the powerful imagery of dark and combatting it.
    Eldoria

    The city turns into a sea of flames
    Eldoria
    After 7 months, my fiction on SH finally has a recommendation in Similar Series, despite being recommended on my other fiction pages.

    Well, that's not bad, because my fiction is so subversive that a suitable recommendation candidate can only be found in the prequel series.
    Eldoria
    Sleep when you're sleepy.
    Eat when you're hungry.
    Write when you have free time.
    It's simple but expensive...
    Since we only have 24 hours in a day.
    Eldoria
    Well, I also thank to @Omarfaruq because he read and gave 3 ratings and 3 reviews in 3 different fictions voluntarily at SH.

    Dude, I didn't bribe you to write reviews, right?
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    Eldoria
    Eldoria
    Well, my second FMC, Detective Clara, also remains kind, empathetic, and concerned about the suffering of others, even though she lives in a morally corrupt world. Her goal isn't to win... but to remain human. Hold on to your heart wherever you are... and you'll live as a human being.
    Omarfaruq
    Omarfaruq
    My goal is a little different, we are not the same.
    Eldoria
    Eldoria
    Whatever your goals... I hope you are well.
    Eldoria
    Finally, after more than 7 months, my fiction has gained 2 organic ratings (average 4.5) on RR.

    Well, a small number but valuable considering a subversive fiction [Post-Apocalyptic Motherhood Dark Fantasy] especially if we just wait and don't rely on review swaps to increase the rating.
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    Eldoria
    By the way, it only increased by 1 rating but my fiction's rank rose from 40k to 33k. A simple achievement worth being grateful for.
    Omarfaruq
    Omarfaruq
    You should always be grateful for what you have.
    Eldoria
    If you want to gauge the potential for reader engagement with your fiction, put yourself in the reader's shoes, not the author's.

    Not all readers are authors, and even if they are, it's only a small percentage.

    A fundamental authorial mistake is assuming that a work will be popular simply because it's well-written.
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    Eldoria
    Eldoria
    Finally, like it or not, market research is important even though it is troublesome.
    D
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    :blob_popcorn:
    *me, who doesnt want my writing to be good, or popular, or even read...
    L1aei
    L1aei
    You could read what you wrote out loud. That sometimes helps me catch where breaks in a sentence to breathe are needed too. :sweat_smile:
    Eldoria

    Well, since vol 2 is finished, now I will narrate Alice (Chivalry Justice) against Marry (Bloody Justice).

    They both meet through Detective Clara (Conscience Justice) in vol 3.
    Eldoria
    Marry wrapped her arms around her daughter from behind and rested her chin atop the small head.

    “Mommy?!”

    “Mama loves Caelan.”

    “Caelan loves Mommy too, hehe…”

    Caelan felt her hair grow wet.

    “Mommy… Caelan’s hair is wet.”

    “Sometimes rain falls inside the house, honey. Mama will hug Caelan.”

    “Mommy is the best in the whole world."

    Tears slipped through her lashes.

    “Black Mist… Clara…”
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    Eldoria
    Scene clip Vol 2 Chapter 94: Epilogue – Between Mist, Conscience, and Roses – Three Faces of Women Gazing at One Another.
    Eldoria
    Finally... after days of burnout... the epilogue of volume 2 is finally finished. It's a bittersweet ending, with no winners, only wounds. However, at least there's still a small hope amidst the darkness.

    The epilogue is titled Vol 2 Chapter 94: "Between Mist, Conscience, and Roses – Three Faces of Women Gazing at One Another."
    TinaMigarlo
    hey. god still likes the irish, I see.
    The new book I started tossing up. Cover sailed through. wonder of all wonders, it showed up on a search by title. and, I finally got to see a chapter of mine in the updated list. almost like being a human being again.
    yay
    now, if i could just get some readers.
    TinaMigarlo
    I can see I'm going to have to "report" user Eldoria
    for? just being too damn sweet and cute.
    but seriously, I threw preface and 5 chapters of another book up
    yeah, once again. Can't search to find it, as usual? my updates don't appear so I can get clicks.
    is this place prejudiced against the Irish, or what.
    that's probably it. Always trying to keep the irish down.
    a story as old as time itself, *kek*
    TinaMigarlo
    I read this...
    Vol 1 Chapter 1: Prologue – An Executioner of Blood Who Became Mommy
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    TinaMigarlo
    TinaMigarlo
    you write in what is clearly this modern webnovel style. short chapters. a single direct sentence though well formed can pass for a paragraph. two sentences, more then enough. It was shocking to me to first encounter this WN style I call it, but I got used to seeing it.
    Eldoria
    Eldoria
    Well, I'm just adapting to the platform. If this writing style is used for a paperback book, then customers might get upset because the pages are filled with blank lines instead of content. Lol
    TinaMigarlo
    TinaMigarlo
    you would have to ask to read a chapter of mine. and i write in what i think of as "a paperback I would have bought and read" style, IE trad pub. And yes, I am aware most webnovel fans simply detest it. disclaimer thus delivered. so don't feel obligated.
    TinaMigarlo
    I am now officially stalking, erm... *following*, eldoria.
    TinaMigarlo
    eldoria. I only just joined and barely started posting on the forums, and I saw your name several times already. what's site etiquette here, I have no idea. am i supposed to ask your permission to follow you, or what. also, you seem kind of reserved and I'm definitely eccentric and irreverent. I might not be your cup of tea. that's why I ask first.
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    TinaMigarlo
    TinaMigarlo
    eldoria: Personally, I respect everyone here, regardless of their preferences.
    oh boy. Yeah, I suspected that. the unspoiled sweetness will be refreshing after the last ten years spent on perhaps the darkest corner of the internet. eldoria? I used to be like you when I was little. then the world had its way with me.
    TinaMigarlo
    TinaMigarlo
    I could never take you where I spent the last ten internet years, eldoria.
    They would light you up and piss you out.

    eldoria:Public facilities are accessible to anyone.

    hey, everyone! eldoria? is free use! public property!
    (that didn't come out right)
    D
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