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BenJepheneT
I wrote the first chapter to my first smut series
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BenJepheneT
BenJepheneT
Shaizic
I am Writing a grimdark truly messed up book, would like some feedback, However Not about how horrible my grammar I know about that
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7
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765
Shaizic
Shaizic
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Comment swap
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11
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933
Deleted member 68927
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Zirrboy
Feedback + suggestions (Closed)
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Zirrboy
Zirrboy
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Post Your Synopsis & Get Feedback
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208
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22K
joeblow12
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ScarletCore
Will my novel last on here?
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3
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746
ConcubusBunny
ConcubusBunny
RepresentingThree
critique this short story please.
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7
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1K
SakeVision
SakeVision
DominaterRaider
Would love feedback for my short story
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1
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287
RepresentingWrath
RepresentingWrath
DominaterRaider
I have a small first chapter going, I like how dark it is but does anyone else feel the same when reading it
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4
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512
DominaterRaider
DominaterRaider
killwrites
Need feedback from people who love reading GL smut
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3
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489
killwrites
killwrites
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Help a new writer out. I hope I can get feedback for my story.
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2
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344
gitagon
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LilTV1155
Asking for Feedback for Archive of FAS Lores - Chapter 2
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4
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420
LilTV1155
LilTV1155
LifeContinuesOn
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I have no idea if anyone is following one of my million stories, which one should I focus one for awhile?
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3
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364
Deleted member 45782
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Beta Reader/Feedback Request
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10
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1K
Snusmumriken
Snusmumriken
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A new user and writer. Please help with my first chapter
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5
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517
Yi_San
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Villam
A new member needs feedback
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8
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817
Villam
Villam
F
An ero novel...
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3
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720
Friendly_neighbour
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I humbly request all to read the story I have posted
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7
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1K
Representing_Tromba
Representing_Tromba
RodentCowboy
Please review and let me know what to fix for my story
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2
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341
Snusmumriken
Snusmumriken
Kuroinamida91
Got a 1 star rating and needing feedback.
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22
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3K
bigbear51
bigbear51
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