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RodentCowboy
Please review and let me know what to fix for my story
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2
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341
Snusmumriken
Snusmumriken
Kuroinamida91
Got a 1 star rating and needing feedback.
2
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22
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3K
bigbear51
bigbear51
killwrites
First-time user starting a brand new series, please review it?
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15
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1K
Snusmumriken
Snusmumriken
HyperiousTheSun
How do you like skits?
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3
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786
SakeVision
SakeVision
RodentCowboy
Please help me become a better writer
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3
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314
RepresentingCaution
RepresentingCaution
EngineGear
Chapter 1 Feedback
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8
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648
LilTV1155
LilTV1155
L
Could somebody please give a feedback on my first work?
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6
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533
Lana
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Archwizard
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I have written a novel about twins. Please check it out and give feedback
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4
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382
LilTV1155
LilTV1155
Archsage
What's your feedback on this?
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10
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909
LilTV1155
LilTV1155
FeverDream
How are those fight scenes?
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6
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498
LilTV1155
LilTV1155
ElijahRyne
Please tell me if something is wrong. Last chapter I messed up when writing my dialogue. My new chapter is 80% so I am just double checking.
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11
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989
ElijahRyne
ElijahRyne
Lloyd
Beta readers needed
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5
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538
Lloyd
Lloyd
CZ2
Thoughts and feedback on my light-hearted lewd comedy story first chapter?
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1
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222
SakeVision
SakeVision
InfantryTerminator
Need feedback on story description
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4
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604
trinitys_gadget
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Would like someone to check out my work
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10
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732
legalolis
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Cherry_W_Hanako
Can you lend me your eyes?
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3
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267
RepresentingCaution
RepresentingCaution
ElijahRyne
My ‘spidysense’ tells me something is wrong, yet I can not find the issue. Please help.
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5
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823
ElijahRyne
ElijahRyne
RavensQuill
My most recent attempt at Isekai/LitRPG... Thoughts?
2
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21
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2K
Snusmumriken
Snusmumriken
Nhatduongg
I finished some chapters and I need some reviews.
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0
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333
Nhatduongg
Nhatduongg
HyperiousTheSun
Newbie author wanting some advice
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1
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210
scribesaga
scribesaga
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