Story Feedback

M
need feedback
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4
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578
Mister_Benis
M
Shnux
Please give me feedback on my latest novel (this is my second time writing smut and I'm trying my best to keep it interesting)
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0
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274
Shnux
Shnux
OtakuKen
Started writing for the first time!!
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3
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532
OtakuKen
OtakuKen
NikkuNii
I will be grateful if you shall feel inclined to provide feedback on this.
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2
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348
NikkuNii
NikkuNii
K
How is my grammar and presentation? [Technomen Chapter One]
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1
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388
greyblob
greyblob
NikkuNii
Feedback pls ☺
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0
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245
NikkuNii
NikkuNii
D
Can I get feedback on my new story, please?
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8
Views
767
Deleted member 68927
D
D
Any feedback on the first parts of my story?
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1
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223
LilTV1155
LilTV1155
B
How's my first chapter?
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3
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414
SakeVision
SakeVision
T.K._Paradox
Reedited Chapters
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2
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526
T.K._Paradox
T.K._Paradox
ConcubusBunny
I need feedback on my AU
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1
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250
Zirrboy
Zirrboy
Vnator
Is my Second Story good?
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4
Views
811
greyblob
greyblob
J
Please give me extremely harsh reviews- no i am not a masochist
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18
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2K
Draconite
Draconite
H
Could someone give me feedback on my first two chapters?
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4
Views
573
Arthur-67
A
chapter1king
Feedback - Invictus
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0
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200
chapter1king
chapter1king
Astrokitten
First story, would love any feedback
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6
Views
530
chapter1king
chapter1king
N
Howdy-do, asking for feedback regarding a story of mine?
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1
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239
chapter1king
chapter1king
D
Please Review My Story. Harsh Criticism Welcome.
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5
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1K
Lloyd
Lloyd
punchew
This might not be your cup o' tea, but please tell me your opinion on this novel I'm working on!
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6
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579
Cipiteca396
Cipiteca396
Anon_Y_Mousse
Thoughts on my description for a LitRPG-esque story
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5
Views
636
RepresentingWrath
RepresentingWrath
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