Eldoria Sunday at 4:32 PM I believe a good mystery narrative should be fair in providing narrative clues through foreshadowing and scattering subtle hints; so both the protagonist and the reader have an equal opportunity to uncover the mystery.
I believe a good mystery narrative should be fair in providing narrative clues through foreshadowing and scattering subtle hints; so both the protagonist and the reader have an equal opportunity to uncover the mystery.
SRB Sunday at 4:08 PM I oversalted the egg fried rice. It's not bad, but also not good enough. Overall, it's a passable first attempt, although I wish it would be better.
I oversalted the egg fried rice. It's not bad, but also not good enough. Overall, it's a passable first attempt, although I wish it would be better.
LeilaniOtter Sunday at 3:37 PM *frantically running after the person in the time machine, waving her arms* "Wait, hold on! We found a worse guy!"
*frantically running after the person in the time machine, waving her arms* "Wait, hold on! We found a worse guy!"
Zakuro ShrimpShady Zakuro wrote on ShrimpShady's profile. Sunday at 3:33 PM https://www.facebook.com/permalink.php?story_fbid=930814086357815&id=100082876951811

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