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I think there is no goal here. TempoK shares their thoughts about the story if they feel like reading it, I guess it's up to us if we...

W ho

I agree with other respondents that your narrator over-explains the characters' thoughts and feelings. In an amnesia scene, your scene...

Personally I would first go 'Aegis looked at the clamor quietly as he picked a piece of meat from his plate. "One gold and ten solver."...

If you're a good person, Adorable Filter would be an angel.

Why does the same standard genre story template with one minor twist always win? I need to change the way I write.

I am most certainly not a good person

I agree with other respondents that your narrator over-explains the characters' thoughts and feelings. In an amnesia scene, your scene...

The cow doesn't even know we're all living in a rotting whale carcass Come back when you're a little more esoteric

The dark, cannibalistic one or the horny one? Because I think Gamefreak approved the latter by saying that humans and pokemon "used to...

And then it decided to move into the territory I loathe the most; merging two martial arts movies that I'm ok with, characters included...

https://twkan.com/book/101671.html Dropped in c250++ So this is historic fanfic because MC can travel back in time and him meeting...

Yo, pokemon fanfic are wack. I read one and wondered if PETA would be the lesser of 2 evils. And Gamefreaks isn't helping, wtf, why are...

Once again, let me summon @Eldoria the Great!!!