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I'm so glad you later explained that the context of the scene was memory loss because this almost felt like the tension in the tone was... -
Ease the metaphors. There are too many, and since we are in Iris’s head, lines like these sound as if a narrator is speaking to the...
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:meowsip: Looks good. Formatting might be a tad cleaner. Also tone back on the metaphors.
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I really like the premise. If you're looking for more tension here, I'd recommend leaving out the internal thoughts/intentions of...
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No, just you. The whale ate you and you became part of its skeleton, then the whole thing, then it died because you got revenge on it by... -
Yes, you are a big dead whale skeleton.
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@Lorelliad the masses aren't ready for them @Alski I'm Hope the blue whale skeleton housed in the Natural History Museum in London?
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Some days I feel like putting on an anime girl profile picture, but that doesn't match the vibe I give off
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🥰:blob_nom: My angel, my sunlight <3 thank you for helping me through hard times
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Author_Riceball updated their status.I realized two of my man characters basically end up fighting the entire fucking world and win at the end. The both of them are like... -
JayMark commented on ShrimpShady's profile post.No, just you. The whale ate you and you became part of its skeleton, then the whole thing, then it died because you got revenge on it by... -
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JayMark commented on ShrimpShady's profile post.Yes, you are a big dead whale skeleton.
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🥰:blob_nom: My angel, my sunlight <3 thank you for helping me through hard times