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The link is here. I need some suggestion. https://docs.google.com/document/d/16CkkV4ffQib7q-nrMDpVV79SAFWRyImly4wI8UZizNo/edit?usp=sharing

Yep, the one Star Rating is damn demoralizing. Especially when your received almost zero feedback. Now maybe someone should force the rater to go for Jordan Peterson's route.... leave at least 5O word requirement for each rating. If they want to troll then show the world they are a troll or be...

Rem as a character went from a man looking at a hopeless world, into a man carrying a semblance of hope. It all to do with the nature of his philosophy and upbringing. Basically, that dream of a hopeful reality is John Wick’s dog. Satholia is the angel who resurrected it and every a-hole who...

The wait is over and the chapter is out. And I will adjust some part of the prologue down the week

I am going through ch 33 it will be upload today. I am just busy lately sorry for the delay

originally the west character piece used to be good, but it has degraded in recent years. There are JoJo Bizzare adventure. Araki is a master for a reason search mother’s basement youtube video for further detail. Then here comes the unlikeliest source of comparison. The Kamen riders series...

Can you check the prologue might be too difficult to change but the synopsis could be adjusted https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1735/horizon-dawn/

Yes, berserk is dark but there is something you root for. We Casca to go back to normal. We want Guts to have a happy life. If the world is a hundred percent asshats and the MC going to die anyway, why care. You can make it dark but there must be a semblance of hope. Hell, in a coming arc of my...

Guys I need some activity inject into the novel... it look kind of dead so far https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1735/horizon-dawn/

I believe it is a balance of both. Too dark, you alienate your audience. Too light, the audience wouldn’t sympathetic. A bit of both needs. One of my main characters eats this. She was exile out from her home. Her entire family pretty much turn against her. Her father is responsible for the...

Given that I just finished my latest chapter of Horizon Dawn, I feel that I think I need latest chapter discussion despite the lack and dying activity Synopsis: Ever wonder what would happen if earth got transported into a magical plane several times its size? It might be a miracle or curse…...

I will clarify this because it pops up so much. The gods are meant to be immature and irresponsible. They are the strongest faction bar none in the story (until HD fully form), and the main source of the conflict. They are not evil per se but selfish and immature. The reason conflict even...

Yes for the first 8 chapters meanwhile 18 on the ward was more or less consistency. I am learning how to use Grammarly back then... Just comment on the chapter you want a fix and I will do it as fast as I can

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1735/horizon-dawn/

Guys my story got panned in Royal road without any feedback. Meanwhile, Scribblehub activity has slow to the crawl. Do you have any idea where do I need to go/advertise for some feedback

Just general opinion. I am trying to increase the reader count and prioritize which chapter need a grams check

After getting sick of how every XIanxia turns out and how every Isekai but some is essential. I decided to write my own version. The original chapters are written before I get a hang on Grammarly, so please excuse the low quality (Please tell me how bad each one is so I can prioritize). So far...

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I am writing the novel and I believe I mail both the plot and the character down but the grammar was a pain... I Am pretty sure I can correct it but I don’t know whether or not I will make it worse or better. Anyone care to help because (due to increasing workload) I plan to paste the editable...