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  1. Sloth-of-Bangkok

    Anyone read The New Gate LN?

    Here... High Human adventure journal after a death game. Read it, cope with it, glad the romance actually went somewhere. Anyway may the discussion continue (Shnee is my favorite) Pls support my novel (Shameless advertisement) https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1735/horizon-dawn/
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    Setting of fantasy world

    As a hobby writter. I am sick of the Wuxia crap and pretty much ignore all cultural framework to build my base from the ground up. If I cannot invent a new system from 0, then I fail as a creative thinker. My novel is an isekai multiverse so I operate on whatever the fuck come to my mind. Unlike...
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    Recommendations Your works?

    Obligatory self-shilling? Shit, I am in. Probably the most innovative novel you will never heard off. Now watch me try to juggle ten different story arc for a good old ideal hero reconstruction story. Read if you hate your generic Wuxia and spineless Jap protagonist because this thing is make as...
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    Popadantsy

    Because the possibility of shoving in a modern day character in the setting we can basically make up as we go along
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    Recommendations Weak to strong, ANYTHING

    Well I can recommend my novel. The romance aspect is barely kick in. There are around ten main characters I need to joggle around. Two guys out of five plan to have a harem, but two won't (one too loyal, another too smart... the harem boys suffer and the smartass never let them live it down)...
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    Reacting to Hate Comments

    You actually get comment. Lucky guys. I get nothing.
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    What is your Gem of a novel on this site ?

    I will ship mine. Seriously need more readers. I still need to rework chapter in 23-50 range, but I think the plot would satisfy your really well. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1735/horizon-dawn/
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    My Computer is Destroyed so i need mobile gems

    Fate Grand Order buddy. Join me in hell
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    How do you get out of the NTR Hole

    Have a moral of steel. See yourself in a poor man shoe and accept Donald Trump as your emperor and king.
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    Anyone minds writing me a review?

    Currently, My novel has gathered the pitiable number of 1 review and the vote process is not very helpful only (13). I need help here. Any opinion is welcome. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1735/horizon-dawn/
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    Thoughts and Plot Suggestions for my second novel.

    And here is the price of Mediocrity. You play there to much, you make them look like a fucking simp. No one want to read about a random soilder on the battlefield or the above average guy pretending to be average (unless there are a twist or depth that explain his humility). You need a reason...
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    Thoughts and Plot Suggestions for my second novel.

    Overwhelming strength mean you never struggle and never form bond and experience with those struggling. Makoto from Moon god is one bad utilization. His overwhelming power and lack of effort to gain said power make his development and growth so slow you barely get anywhere in 200 chapter. No...
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    Thoughts and Plot Suggestions for my second novel.

    Reincarnate to another world is already tried to death. But here is my opinion. War Arc is overrated. If you have to do it, put a twist in it. If it was I, the twist will be no one win the actual war (the entire thing was a Kansas city gambit) so the pain and suffering they endured are for...
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    Share your stories

    Horizon Dawn https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1735/horizon-dawn/ One of the most ambitious story I thought up. As an author, it is the story about giving hope to the world and become an anti-wuxia. Synopsis A story of an Order of Justice and Hope in the world where strength rules all. In the...
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    Need help with Feed backs

    Chapter 0 prototype please tell me did I get this right. I plan to correct the grammar later https://docs.google.com/document/d/12YRAi6BN5dGtB6gSde5fF6Jown_G8J-48p8MglfQkfk/edit?usp=sharing
  16. Sloth-of-Bangkok

    Need help with Feed backs

    Can’t change chapter 1... Complexity is kind of a thing here... But I I have an idea... Chapter 0...
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    Need help with Feed backs

    Should I readjust the tag
  18. Sloth-of-Bangkok

    Need help with Feed backs

    So this is the fact The description is basically a write up detailing the fact that that HD is literally up against several whole worlds a grade above Earth. The first chapter serves as an introduction for Rem and foreshadowing of his main story arc, detailing his character: calm, intelligent...
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    Need help with Feed backs

    Sorry don't have the artwork
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