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Nah because I get way more hits during weeks when I push out a chapter. And I kinda want to see which countries are ahead after the US.

Hence posting under "feature requests" ?

Under stats, I click on insights, and it shows me a heat map of where my story is read over the past week. How do I see the same map but for all time?

Opening paragraph— you present a band of characters who are self-aware or their nature. This could be interesting if you pull it off right. Is Alicia and Allicia the same person? This is expository: "The spells of this type provide additional information about the enemy." It states explicitly...

I read about half of your first chapter, and I can't post a review on this, sorry. The prose is littered with errors and typos, things are introduced with little to no context, stuff kinda just happens. Overall it feels rushed. Your MC has some elf girl land on her, and they just start...

My personal opinion, the phrasing could use some polish. There are a lot of instances where I think maybe you felt like you needed to spell things out for the reader, but it drags the pacing. One example: it's 3:47 am, and the next sentence says "another late night well I to the morning" or...

My opinion? Your opening reads like a biographical with no conflict and no hook. After the view of the rocks (which isn't bad) but then drags into a whole family history

Why does she have to be a princess? What if the king sacrificed a peasant girl dressed up as a princess to trick the dragon, and the dragon decided to raise her as his own, teach her to be a badass military leader to one day go back and crush the king? I dunno

No such thing as too funny. I've learned that the art of being funny is to not try to be funny, but rather simply tell the truth. Tell the naked, honest truth because that's hilarious.

I've been writing badly since 2007, writing much better now. Throughout all of my writing "career" I've barely made $100 off my stories. So take whatever I say with that in mind. 1) never EVER argue with a beta reader or a review. If someone posts 1-star because they hate your crap, take it...

You don't have to explain to your audience how your magic works. Unless your MC is a student of magic and you want to walk them through learning it, it's better that you don't. Keep the mystery alive!

It reads well. I have no problem with your English, and I was able to see the fight in my mind. Good work. Only thing, you linked to chapter 100+ something, and I have no idea who these people are or why they're fighting. I'm going to assume this was set up in an earlier chapter.