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This is fine, but you made a little mistake. A verse is a single line, which means you actually wrote a 32-verse story, or an 8 stanzas story. That was still cool though! Okay, my turn: Situation is a mystery, the lonely boy carries on Shadows lurk in the horizon, danger stalks hidden around...

Since you're being honest about this, I'll be it too: Tell me your opinion of my story as a random reader. Mine is a super-hero comedy, with a newly formed villain as a main character. It has some litRPG elements but those are just to fill the word count just a way to entertain myself. The link...

So! You're reading this, huh? You must be reaaaally bored then... But don't worry! I've got the solution to your problem! Namely: Shiristory! You might have heard of Shiritori before. It's basically a Japanese game of words where you have to say a words that starts with the same syllable your...

There's no need of it, since nobody will ever win (unless some kind of condition is specified). Else, you'd just either declare every new comment as the round's winner, which makes prizes impossible, or nobody wins because there's no conclusion. It would be like the 'award for the youngest...

Well, they are overeacting, but then again, what did you expect? It's a movie, I guess they need the drama to make it more interesting. I agree with you on the dead twin thing tho. I guess I'd be a little upset about my parents hiding that kind of stuff from me, but that's about it...

To achieve a that kind of crown you'd have to increase the duration of the sinusoidal function that describes it, which would unbalance the disrupting influence of the thing. Ah, now, if you're talking about a Mobius Halo, that's another thing. I asked my friend from the Magical Institute of...

You know, the way I keep seeing 'Howdy everyone' in the notifications list reminds me of Flowey from Undertale and... well... that's kinda unsettling... Yeah.

Science is the way we call Magic that we understand. And vice versa, Magic is just a Science that we are yet to understand...

Red flag huh...? Historical drama, tragedy... And all your typicall NTR, BL, GL, Harem (I stay away from those because they're almost always too cringy and poorly written) though double-dating is fine, for some reason. Oh, and especially getting filled on details I don't care over and over again...

What a great thread. Seeing people doing this kind of things for free, it makes me think hope is still not lost for mankind... Then I go to school and forget that feeling. Jokes aside, I'd like to request feedback from my story, focusing more on writing style and tips in general than in...

"So, you died. Wanna start over?" This also happens to be the premise for an original game idea of mine. Also: "Six words you say. Why six?"

I usually wait until the first arc is out to put my thoughts together and review a story. Sure, you can go ahead and say somehting like 'It's promising', but a review is about judging the content of the book, not it's cover.

You normally call a prologue divided in several chapters an 'Introductory Arc'. It's perfectly fine to do this, and lot's of people use it as a way to hook people on. However, I advise you to write a strong, attractive Prologue so that people are drawn to your story, and then specify that these...

Cookie magic is simply a form of arcane magic that's based in cookie-aspect mana. It has lots of uses, the most known being in the cookies industry (to make cookies); and for massive damage AoE spells such as Cookie Meteor Shower, Cookintegration, and the forbidden Cookieball that's rumored to...

Dude, we may be evil, despicable, mischievous, traitorous... But touching a loli is going too far. It's on the Horrocrux-level of taboos, ya know?

Hmmm, I see a fellow cookies engineer... However! Partner of mine, the magic of cookies lies in their capacity to go beyond possible! In other words: To put your heart and soul into your cookieforging, and you shall know no limits! And so, writing from his cookie-based net-con writing machine...

First foil hats and now this! Kukukuh, it looks like people are eager to see me fall... However! I still haven't run out of options! Behold, the TWSMIM! (TWSM Interceptor Missile)! Made of 20% aluminum, 80% cookie material, with a maximum speed of 20 Saitamas, and a Kamigami no Gigan tracking...

Gah Gah~ You treacherous maggot! For you to use such an underhanded method... B-But! I can still use my telepathically controlled dragon to melt your foil hat! And then, I can use it to build an aluminum-based massive destructive weapon, and coerce people with it so that they bring me lots of...