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i believe in you! you already started writing it! ^\^

i saw the tag as i was scrolling through the possible tags and am thinking about applying it to my story, even though it's not a term i'd heard before. my story is about a demon getting a mortal to follow her wants and desires to her own destructive ends, granting her great power along the...

i think that magic includes an assumption of flexibility which superpowers don't. merlin can learn a new spell to fly, but cyclops can't learn to do anything besides eye beams. there are obviously exceptions, capes will get new powers sometimes, but to me the flexibility is what makes...

sci fi is hard for me because i suck at getting science details right enough

she's an elemental demon ;) real sexual keys

i like chapter 1! it reminds me of REAMDE by neil stephenson. i think your synopsis doesn't do the story justice. people are probably assuming this is another LITrpg / SAO ripoff, when in reality it's "what if EVE online was a fantasy game and Go metaphor?" I think that helen is a great...

i think that whenever i saw the [brackets] my brain turned off. explain how she recieves the brackets. is a computer constantly reading her mind and telepathically talking to her, is she just reading the messages? i guess i'm curious, if the narrator is just pretending to be happy, how is she...

bumping with some demon girl art

i like the *concept* of someone speedrunning through life for "the perfect ending," but that's not what the story delivers. if the idea is that the narrator is transported into the game, that the game is real life now, those gangsters have to be living, breathing people. otherwise it's just...

"it didnt seem like an ordinary game" why?

this is what i'd say to every litrpg writer. the more the mechanics are hidden from the reader, the more interested in the story it becomes. you can *have* ranks in the story, but make it so only nerds know their rank or something. to OP: i'd challenge you to do something a little different...

the first chapter not being spaced right and more importantly not having a paragraph indent almost made me close it in the first instant. "Gravitational forces," he muttered with a smirk ofsatisfaction as he landed safely on the new island. The fact that the narrator starts out talking to...

so i like the premise, but i'll tell you what it's missing for this to actually work. the narrator has to be a fucking freak. he has to want this boy so fucking bad that he will literally do *anything*. the reason i'd read this is to see this nice sweet doctor go completely yandere about this...

linking my dubcon demonic dickgirl smut here https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1452889/hellfcked--or-devil-on-her-shoulder/

inverting this by writing a story from the summoned girl's perspective

are there specific times or days of the week you think are better to release? i have monday/tuesdays off so that's when i do my edits, but like, is it better to release on weekends?

whats tftc?

i'm 7ydy, you can say it like 70 or Liddy, nbd either way i like to write but that seems obvious. dancing is great too i only really read stuff with a queer bend these days worm and dorley are among my favorites web novels. worm is so clicky and does Power Systems right while keeping a strong...

i read something that the first sentence should allegorically outline the themes of the story, even if it's an action scene.

i wasnt sure if it was llm, but you saying it makes it make sense. i cant understand what happens in your story