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  1. Moctemma

    Best Quotes From (Anime/LN/Original)

    "All things must pass." The hero club five tenets, I'll leave a video because I'm lazy.
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    Thank you :blob_happy:

    Thank you :blob_happy:
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    MOBA fic? Multiplayer online battle arena? And fic, fiction? Thanks for checking it out...

    MOBA fic? Multiplayer online battle arena? And fic, fiction? Thanks for checking it out :blob_happy:
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    Describe Your Ideal Game

    Perfect games for me already exist. Video game: Resistance fall of man. Strategy: Risk, and more board games. Outdoors: Airsoft, Go-Karts, Football, etc. Cards: Poker, etc. I would say that is easy for me to have fun and be satisfied playing any game. In my family we play frequently, we do...
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    OMG my novel made it to trending, number 6 place :blob_party: I'm very grateful to my readers...

    OMG my novel made it to trending, number 6 place :blob_party: I'm very grateful to my readers :blob_teary:
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    showbiz romance

    What about GL? If it's good I recommend After Exchanging Shadows.
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    Writing a horror story for the sake of "shock value"

    My sister loves horror stories for the impact of something unexpected happening. I rarely watch it or read it, but when I do I expect competent characters. What I look for in a horror story is the despair, absolute and overwhelming dread about the future, but we still fight and never give up...
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    Nogi Sonoko! :blob_aww: Sorry to come out of nowhere, but she's a character of my favorite...

    Nogi Sonoko! :blob_aww: Sorry to come out of nowhere, but she's a character of my favorite series :sweat_smile:
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    Anyone consider writing a Chaotic Neutral/True Neutral MC?

    My main character is Lawful Neutral, though she's perceived as True Neutral by others. I'm mostly using her curiosity, and her flexibility in morals to write her neutrality. She presents herself as good, trying to avoid fights and willing to be friends with the "enemy", but when her companions...
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    I have always thought that it's the best to let readers "breath", I'm currently reading a story...

    I have always thought that it's the best to let readers "breath", I'm currently reading a story that updates daily, and even though the lore is interesting, I don't think much about it because I know I'll get the answers soon. It becomes a superficial reading. But if you let readers wait and...
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    It may be strange, but that's the reason I haven't read your story (daily updates). I'm also...

    It may be strange, but that's the reason I haven't read your story (daily updates). I'm also waiting for a review to see if it's worth the time, or for the story to finish. Which is probably the case for other readers. So take it easy, if you burn out and drop it, your story will be doomed.
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    What kind of writing style do you have?

    I have no idea. I don't think I have one, maybe I do, but I have only been writing for two months; so if I have one, it will surely change. But what I know I don't like, and won't do, is what I think of as "poetry style", where you describe things by comparison with "sensations". There are times...
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    I need feedback on my story please

    I agree, the synopsis needs a rewrite, you have 3 "but" at the end. The word "but" by its nature, invalidates the previous statement in some degree. Imagine what that does to a potential reader who is determining if the story is worth the time.
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    Which is better? Mainstream quality or underrated quality?

    I agree. The difference in plot structure between western media and east, is what comes to mind. But we can define quality based on mistakes and the impact they have. For example, a novel skipping the most important part of the character arc of a secondary character will have better quality than...
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    Which is better? Mainstream quality or underrated quality?

    Clearly the answer is quality. Mainstream or not doesn't matter.
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    Bisexual MC?

    This one, sadly it hasn't been updated https://www.scribblehub.com/series/59028/a-hero-turned-succubus-tale/
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    Just some alternatives to Truck-Sama.

    I'm sure you didn't make it happen, that's not how the world works. Predicting it, yes.
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    Just some alternatives to Truck-Sama.

    Did you finish reading Mushoku Tensei? I couldn't read past the first book, I hated the MC and the magic explanations were boring.
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    Just some alternatives to Truck-Sama.

    Yes, please put some effort into your character's death everyone. I'm sick of them dying hit by a vehicle, or cancer. Haven't you seen 1000 ways to die? For me is instant drop if the character dies that way, it makes me doubt the author has an interesting story; and I have experienced I'm...
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    Does it make me a bad person if I ghost people a lot?

    Can't help because I don't go back. But I do it a lot, irl too. I haven't had a friendship that lasted more than 2 years. But my sister experienced something like that and told me not to do it.
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