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The Aurum family works in witchcraft and alchemy, so their last name comes from Latin for 'gold'. Haejin's name is a Korean name that just fit, lmao. Leonard Astersin's last name came from combining 'Aster' and 'sin'. Mekia's name came from the famous witch Medea. I just tweaked a couple letters.

I understanddd the difficulty in balancing tone and atmosphere, lmao. Sameeeeee.

The end of the world, huh... What kind of apocalypse? Are we talking about the classic zombie kind? What kinda zombies? Genetic mutation, virus, parasitic fungi, or just sudden unexplained stuff, etc... and are we going by the Chinese version that has superpowers, old version from the 2000s, or...

This is a scenario I have never seen before. Wow. Multiple ideas, just throwin em out: - The parents of both stop the fight, or something else interrupts the fight. - MC manages to convince 13 year old they are not a demon. - MC tries, but cannot bring themselves to kill 13 year old. First...

Maybe I should get rid of the 'no harem' rule. People don't seem to careee.

I read the rest of ittt! Yayyyy. I think we have similar styles!

There are five threads giving feedback rn, lol. Just post your novel in any of those threads, and they will give ya what ya want.

Thanks for the feedback. Good to hear that it's not completely failing, lmao. And that it isn't complete horror. Someone told me it is, but that was not my intention, so I was worried over that one. I'll get to your novel soon, but there's around...three in front of yours, so it'll sadly take...

Ahhhh it feels embarrassingggg but I can do this! It won't kill meeee... I'm about to do a rewrite. Changing the tone of the characters to sound more mature, and adding extra description? Anyway, it would be nice to get more opinions before I break this thing...

Hello!! Welcome to Scribble. You write BL, and like giving feedback toooo? I think we might be the same person! :blob_melt:

I said no haremmm! I dunno how to give reviews to harem novels cuz I never read em! Anyway. monologue was too long for my taste. You started the novel off with a bucketload of explanations, and I was boredddd. I thought this was harem! Why no pretty ladies and fanservice? I dislike em, sure...

Rocket crab can flyyyyyy!