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  1. StoneInky

    Narration and twists?

    I like stories without twists. And I think stories without twists are more popular to webnovel readers. Small twists are amazing, you want a lot of them. Common twists, like the nice guy actually being the villain, is also good. But big twists like changing the genre? Or suddenly changing the...
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    "First-Time Writer, Dragon Chaos Story – Pls Send Feedback! ?"

    Oh, um... I'm sorry for your cousin. :blob_pat_sad: Anyway, this has me unhappy. Dunno what to do about it, though. Hmmmm...
  3. StoneInky

    Same. Would kill for some ravioli rn. In fact... :blobspearpeek:

    Same. Would kill for some ravioli rn. In fact... :blobspearpeek:
  4. StoneInky

    What are your thoughts on exploitable characters?

    Depends on the tone of the story. But just like every other trope, it's bad when authors go overboard. At some point it turns into 'every character except the MC is stupid so that the MC looks smarter in comparison'.
  5. StoneInky

    "First-Time Writer, Dragon Chaos Story – Pls Send Feedback! ?"

    Do you go there? You sound like you go there. ...Anyway, hear me out. Your protagonist dude? He better be some perfect Asian genius. Do you know how much I am suffering to go to uni rn? If he... decided he was too good for Seoul University, to the point that he quit? Dude better be the next...
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    "First-Time Writer, Dragon Chaos Story – Pls Send Feedback! ?"

    Yeah, lmaooooo. Oh, and you don't 'dropout' of a university in Korea, too. Why would you drop out? You never drop out. I'm curious what university this dude went to. He can go from 'stupid but passionate nice kid who made a mistake', to 'stupid and lazy waste of space', depending on that, you...
  7. StoneInky

    Did I go to fast?

    There are... titles? What?
  8. StoneInky

    She looks like she found her daddy's white powder stash.

    She looks like she found her daddy's white powder stash.
  9. StoneInky

    Even if you represent Sloth, you should still eat something. Talking to your mom sounds like a...

    Even if you represent Sloth, you should still eat something. Talking to your mom sounds like a good idea. (y)
  10. StoneInky

    They are not. You are just short.

    They are not. You are just short.
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