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I very badly suspect this is AI... or I did until I opened the novel. You skip into a new paragraph every other sentence. The grammar needs work. And your protagonist guy not only has a very similar name to Sung Jinwoo, the dude literally references other novels over and over again. You know...

I'll review ittttt! First Impression: The cover looks okay. Synopsis too. You could break up the sentences and make em less lengthy so they would flow better, but the actual content looks fine. I agree with FoundForester. The novel would improve by a lot just using quote marks, lmao. Nextttt...

First it was bracken fiddleheads. Next it's burnt ends. Now it's ginkgo nuts and dureup. Apparently it'll all kill me. At this point I might as well eat homecooked fugu. Yum.

Sent it to some AI checkers. The results were not good. I'm ignoring people with AI edited stuff who ask for reviews. Tis like bringing factory made pottery to an artisan shop. :sweat_smile:

I don't think it's bad, but split into multiple paragraphs to make it more readable. Your synopsis does not need to be one big lump of text.

As an online writer? Hm... by having your readers give you their gacha game accounts that you resell?

On the bright side, those charred ends on barbecue are apparently even more dangerous. So... it's not just Asians. Western people get a few years shaved off their lifespan too! Let's all get cancer and die early! :blob_party:

I learned that a traditional food in my country, bracken fiddleheads, cause cancer and shave 3-7 years off your life. Even if prepared correctly. Just went to all the academic sources I could find to verify. I feel like crying.

No. I'm your alt. And you know—if you can't beat em, join em.

Dunno about views. But I promise you will get readers asking, 'Wasn't this chapter about something else?', 'Was this retconned?'.

Googling the smell of freshly dead human bodies, how they interact with sulfur, and the curvature of a collapsible spinning rod when you use it to catch perch.