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If possible, after adding one chapter, of course the option to 'preview' is available but there's no link BACK to the chapter list and/or to add another chapter. Unless I'm not seeing it... :blob_hmm:

ooow. I agree. (y) :blob_aww:

I get the feeling that you're upset, but I asked a legit question. I thought this was a style I wasn't aware of. If it's just people writing to their heart's content then okay. I can appreciate that drive.

Ah, I see the confusion. What I mean is that stories have...structures. Usually, there are certain elements that a story needs. So that's why it's hard for me to imagine just one story with so many chapters. I wondered if maybe they were writing mini stories and tacking them on together. I...

More than once, I've seen books on here with over 100+ chapters! Even 200+ chapters. HOW? How are they able to keep producing so many chapters? Is there a skill to it or do they combine different stories? What's the standard? Please give me the 411 :blob_popcorn::blob_aww:?

You're wrong for this.... LOL and where's New Jersy ?? ?

Yes. This gets explained by chapter 4, too. But I'll go back and rethink the pacing. I appreciate you taking the time to give it a look.

Ah. I hadn't thought about this. Okay. I will try to mention the location much sooner. This gets explained later on why kings would not want to incur Wyrn's father's wrath. I will try to hint this a bit better. Thank you. I actually worried things were too slow. I'll give the first few...

The unit of measure is not mentioned again in the entire book. And it is a backward society. I didn't want to focus on something the reader didn't need later. Therefore I put it in casually. I guess that was lazy of me. I do appreciate your feedback. Till now, I'd told myself that it just needs...

Okay. This is my first time encountering this. I'll keep it in mind going forward. Btw, does this mean each new series cover will automatically get removed at the start then later on restored? Or would an ordinary cover get through straightaway? Thank you for clarifying things.

Hello, thank you. I do speak English natively and these are all stylistic choices (except for the "scan" one, that's a typo). I chose "five to the five" to indicate this was a different place, realm, way of counting but without having to reinvent the wheel. Even though it's 3rd person POV, my...

That can be hard, BUT I think he might be able to cannibalize a lot of plot points and/or characters and make new books.

We all have to start somewhere. I think you should take it down but don't chuck it. Let it sit for a bit and then come back and read it again. You might see a lot of value in it.

Yeah, dolphins are pretty terrible.

Okay (y)

Seeing all the famous icons from your youth drop like flies all in the same month. Yeesh

If that was my teenager this old dude's dating and I knew, young body or no, I'd be paying his knees a visit with a baseball bat.

um, okay :whistle: (y)?‍♀️ oh no, ya got me. Ouch. ? Then you'd have to question whether all humans are born with the potential for good or evil. I think most would say that every life has the potential to go either way. Hence there the reason 'guilt' is possible. If there's no free will and...

How dare you! Gus is a sexy name. It just exudes muscles, grime, and a bit of goat piss from him working all day in the fields shirtless!!! (battlecry!!) :mad_s::blob_catflip::blob_no::blobspearpeek:

Maybe, but as an old-timer myself, I tend to blame this 'soft' generation. People feel sorry for themselves and unfortunately, project that onto their characters. More than once (and I SINCERELY mean this), I've seen characters both in mainstream media and lit that has someone do something...