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  1. ConcubusBunny

    Is this so wrong

    I know but the thing is that I want accuracy especially for an oc I made. I want people to have a clear and non clouded image of the character, what's the point of creating something if you can't get the idea of what you created across how you intended. People who say just give people an idea of...
  2. ConcubusBunny

    Is this so wrong

    Hello enby pals, gals and guys I've got a sorta dilemma regarding my character description dump. I began contemplating if it's a good idea to keep it that way instead of spreading it out through out the story, which I don't want to do. On one hand everyone gets a clear picture of what the...
  3. ConcubusBunny

    Feedback on my story

    Thanks for the update, but I'm keeping the description thing, sorta of a personal preference for me than anything else and some of my characters use multiple pronouns which is why the fox and Caribou use she/they pronouns, but you're right maybe I should make another neutral pronoun for them...
  4. ConcubusBunny

    Toilet thoughts: Improvement on a charcter

    Okay first off I don't want to redeem them, I want to make them more rounded and second they are born with adhd I have no idea what your implying but no one with ADHD has some backstory for ADHD
  5. ConcubusBunny

    Toilet thoughts: Improvement on a charcter

    The thing is that I want them to think more on their actions and consider their friends more instead of going off their devices, but I still want them to keep the ditzy drunk nature they have, sorta their trademark.
  6. ConcubusBunny

    Toilet thoughts: Improvement on a charcter

    Hello my gals guys and enby pals. I need advice on how to make my character more rounded. I've got a sorta good handle on some others, but one still bothers me. My dizzy drunk, shameless, thoughtless, one track mind, barely focused salamander. But I want a way to flesh them out more right now...
  7. ConcubusBunny

    Toilet thoughts: How do you "characterize"

    Hello my guys, gals and enby pals. So while writing, I noticed something that I didn't really consider prior. How do I characterize my cast? I have some idea, but for the most part, I'm completely lost. I want to make them very distinguishable from one another, taking tropes and putting little...
  8. ConcubusBunny

    Looking for plot ideas for a sonic AU

    Really? Most of my sonic knowledge comes from archie comics Sonic so I didn't even know this. Robotnik isn't gender bent only sonic is. The doc is gender fluid though with a robot body. I should probably also add that Sonic is aromantic, so there won't be any romance related relationships. At...
  9. ConcubusBunny

    Looking for plot ideas for a sonic AU

    It actually isn't, found it on amino and planning to use it as cover image
  10. ConcubusBunny

    Looking for plot ideas for a sonic AU

    Hello guys, gals and enby pals. I decided to take up an au for sonic which I love Now I can't get to it immediately cause I already have a series I'm working on and can't do two at the same time. I want to know what plot points you'd like to see in a sonic non lore friendly au. I was hoping to...
  11. ConcubusBunny

    Toilet thoughts: Harem or sex friends that is the question

    Hello my guys, gals and enby pals. Now I was thinking on the old John when something strange happened, is the sex friends tags related to the harem genre. Now you may asking yourself well of course it, but then what's the polygamy/andry tag for then? I began to wonder if you had a tag for sex...
  12. ConcubusBunny

    Toilet thoughts: Soft masculine character

    Wait, what no childlike is synonymous to irrational, unfocused and impatient, but taking it to the extreme to the point where you are unaware of the things you're doing not feminity, where did that line of thought even come from?
  13. ConcubusBunny

    Toilet thoughts: Soft masculine character

    Ahh yes the beta male thought, whenever I hear this I think people don't actually know what the word means. Just cause someone isn't assertive or agressive you reserve to now say they are beta. No they aren't they are people, beta and alpha is not a real thing, only whiny man children would even...
  14. ConcubusBunny

    Toilet thoughts: Soft masculine character

    Man, you must have been around emotional reserved dudes, cause I know no dude in my life that wasn't emotional or expressed their feeling except my father who's a toxic abusive douchebag. So no dudes aren't less emotional by default just by choice.
  15. ConcubusBunny

    Toilet thoughts: Soft masculine character

    That's the thing I never mentioned feminine male characters, I said ones that let their emotions. Those traits aren't feminine traits you know, feeling. I never mention that I want feminine male mc, I just said I'm tired of seeing male MC's who act like they don't feel anything but sadness or...
  16. ConcubusBunny

    Toilet thoughts: Soft masculine character

    In my opinion I'd say the manly the characters exactly trying to be the manliest but more they are more reserved cold always have to save everyone not necessarily grompy. IN that notion I'd say Guts, Natsu, Goku, Kirito, the butler from overlord, Sin Jin Yuu from solo leveling. The reason I put...
  17. ConcubusBunny

    Toilet thoughts: Soft masculine character

    I was thinking on the lines of Gray, Kazuma, Dgray man, Saitama characters like that, aren't trying to be manly men, they're just dudes trying to live their lives. I never said feminine there's a difference between someone showing emotions and someone who's more feminine in nature. Not being...
  18. ConcubusBunny

    Toilet thoughts: Soft masculine character

    While coasting through web novels like a phantom I realized that there are no soft masculine main character. I've only seen the hardened suck the fun out of everything I must be the strongest. And I got to say it's pretty boring to read 100 MC's that are mostly the same. Now I don't mean the...
  19. ConcubusBunny

    Toilet thoughts: Redemption arc plot thread I'm trying to work out.

    I thought of this but it just doesn't fit for the cast, first I should say that anti hero doesn't fit on the main cast. Could work for the supporting cast but not the main one. I want them to get redeemed within the narrative without it seeming like I pulled the 'redemption arc card ' out of my...
  20. ConcubusBunny

    Toilet thoughts: Redemption arc plot thread I'm trying to work out.

    Huh, you know my villain characters don't really have a goal or purpose for being it's sorta their job. Someone needs something stolen or people killed, you call them. Their purpose to being villains is more of they weren't cut out for being good guys not that something so horrible happened and...
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