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  1. ConcubusBunny

    Character progression assistance

    It's not Din world it's the second one I'm writing that I didn't put in my signature, Din world is in a time frame where such things are moralized, so having a character with a sexual/romantic dilemma where it's not focused on that would be pointless. It's actually on a second series I've been...
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    Character progression assistance

    Thanks this helps a lot, but there's something I noticed. You seem to think I did this for A) LGBT rep sake which isn't true, more like I just wanted lgbt rep in my story. B) limiting them to a label when not really, I picked this cause it's what I felt fit how I draft the characters romantic...
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    Character progression assistance

    Yeah it's action slice of life Smit focused more on the character arcs and relation. The not killing a girl for any other than there being no need to or against a characters morale code is dumb in my book so I won't be doing that. I'm obviously not stating their gender/romantic/sexual...
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    How do you make a good character who has a severe god-complex?

    Hmm, make her very narcissistic but charismatic like Deadpool or iron man, they more often times than not think that they are above everyone around them and constantly boast about achievements and powers. But make it lessen from go time to time, from being knocked down by someone more skilled...
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    Character progression assistance

    Hello enby pals, guys and gals. So I have a certain problem with my night and mother of the sisters. So I wanted to make the knight an aro lesbian and the mother aceflux bisexual. For further understanding, the human kingdom where they've been apart of until recent, saw this sorta thing as...
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    Thanks owotrucked

    Thanks owotrucked
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    Hey owotrucked for your series in the spoiler box you somehow removed the spoiler name and...

    Hey owotrucked for your series in the spoiler box you somehow removed the spoiler name and replaced it with something else, could you tell me what you did
  8. ConcubusBunny

    Writing I feel like I may have made a mistake

    The story is fairly in with not long battles that aren't me necessary, the fight scenes are important for a sense of how battle goes for the characters. I don't put unneeded info in description it doesn't fit my style, the characters will do stuff like backstory when the time comes for it.
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    Writing I feel like I may have made a mistake

    Hello guys, gals and enby pals So guys how many words are chapters on average, I'm looking at mind and wow, that's a lot for a few scenes with not much happening PerSay. What brought this on was I was in the middle of a quick fight scene followed by a heated sex scene when I noticed I'm 3000+...
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    Writing I need assistance with another scene

    Hello guys, gals and enby pals. I have a scene that I don't half ass cause it is important for character development of my MC, a supporting character and plot for a huge part of the story. It might be a bit confusing but I'll try explaining as best that I can. After the advice from my previous...
  11. ConcubusBunny

    I need feedback on my AU

    I need feedback on the first chapter of an AU I did, any advice to improve will be appreciated. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/384556/sorcerer-kingdom-alliance-au/
  12. ConcubusBunny

    Uuuh help

    Hello guys, gals and enby pals. I need help, I just posted a new novel, but it's not showing in latest or in my series list. I don't know what to do.
  13. ConcubusBunny

    Software/Apps to use in drawing

    Fire Alpaca is what I use mostly, best app to be honest but if you want a software that could animate as well, then get Krita. The pen sensitivity is a little off and the mechanics could use some work, but if you could work around that then use it
  14. ConcubusBunny

    edited cover art

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    I need assistance with a scene

    It's more of they couldn't before. The sisters prior could bench press the entire village, plus all of the knights, even without magic, so it wasn't much of an issue. The problem was the kingdom that currently ruled over their village and the sisters didn't have the desire to rule over them...
  16. ConcubusBunny

    I need assistance with a scene

    Alright I'd guess jealousy, being a disgrace as a human, showing unreasonable hate and prejudice towards the sister's for what they view as being on a higher level than them and hate on monsters that the girls just revealed to be familiar with coupled that with mob mentality and you have this...
  17. ConcubusBunny

    I need assistance with a scene

    Hello guy, gals and enby pals. So I've got this dilemma that I need some input on a scene I'm planning and this will be hard explain, but here goes. After a village was nearly destroyed and a large number of the citizen lives lost by a neighboring nation. Two sisters- one older and one younger...
  18. ConcubusBunny

    I summon thee to help with litrpg world building

    Sounds nice but like I stated you can't see someone else's stats even with cybernetic enhancements also they can't see health or mana points, they sorta have to just feel it. Makes it more realistic that way, but people with observation type skills can guage the amount of mana output one has...
  19. ConcubusBunny

    I summon thee to help with litrpg world building

    Yes but limited to what a person understands rather than an omnipresent force giving you information or giving you the ability to alter your stats if you gain enough points.
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    I summon thee to help with litrpg world building

    Intelligence and have a innate ability of observation and analysis, it's something that can be easily taught and skills can't be bought in a system store you have to learn it from someone. Because seven deadly sins system level doesn't suit the system I want to build or make much sense to me I...
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