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    Feelings and Fondness

    Of course. I know you said you were working on it a couple of weeks ago. I just finished the last chapter.
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    Feelings and Fondness

    Here is what I've spent the past year working on. I've posted in several threads over the past couple of months, but only one or two of them actually responded and even then they didn't read most of it. I've almost finished, I just have the last chapter to edit which should be done very soon...
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    Insighter V.2.0.

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/749073/feelings-and-fondness/' Here is my story. My aim with it is to provide an insight into being neurodivergent, but not knowing it. All the feelings and emotions of thinking almost the whole world is against you, despite just being yourself. So far I've...
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    The Insincere Post Ironic Unhelpful Feedback Thread

    Here is a little story I've been working on for almost a year. So far I've polished as far as the eighth chapter, but anything would be appreciated, as I haven't had much feedback at all. Feelings and Fondness
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    I will read your story and give reviews. (I am OatMush's disciple).

    Sorry, I didn't see this until just now. I'm okay with that. I had another go at editing and saw there were a few things I overlooked. Initially I removed all the scene breaks but now I've put them back in, at least as far as the eighth chapter.
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    I will read your story and give reviews. (I am OatMush's disciple).

    A review on the story page would work better, as I'd probably see it more quickly. I am glad you like what you've seen so far.
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    I will read your story and give reviews. (I am OatMush's disciple).

    Hi Patrick! I saw in another post that you love trains. My story is centred around a preteen train enthusiast and his struggles in life. Feel free to take a look. So far I believe I've polished as far as the sixth chapter. Beyond this you may encounter some minor errors or oversized...
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    Verdante’s Pub (Share 333 words of your story for feedback)

    Today, I started work on more intensive editing for the first chapter of my youth novel. In doing so I elaborated more on my protagonist's first visit to his new friend's house. It was just over 340 words. Now I've got the entire excerpt to exactly 333 words (according to Scribblehub anyway...
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    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    Aww, thanks for your honest and helpful feedback little chickie! :) Yes, I must admit I do have a lot of work to do to tidy up my story. So much perhaps that I just wasn't quite sure where to start. I'll try to keep the paragraph lengths in mind when I go through the next round of editing...
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    What do you like about your writing?

    I'm just grateful that I can write. I have the visions of what I want to see in my mind, but I can't translate that into visual art. Over the years I've gotten better at writing and I think I'm now at a suitable skill level to consider publication.
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    How do you use the slice of life genre?

    My story is very much slice-of-life. A good visual representation for both my story and the genre in general is the TV series "Young Sheldon", if you're familiar with it. Or for the adult characters "Big Bang Theory". Comedy is often slice-of-life, but dramatized to make it funny.
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    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    Aww, this is a great little idea. Here chicky, I offer you my feed. I love adorable things like this. :)
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