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I'm quite guilty of making my characters satisfy my fetishes, though my novel is the first time I've had my protagonist experience them too. However, with my neurodivergent mind I'm confused over whether they are actually fetishes, or just autistic obsessions. I particularly have a soft spot for...

Here is my finished tale. I look forward to hearing from you. (Twelve chapters, 75k words). https://www.scribblehub.com/series/749073/feelings-and-fondness/

This is my little story. I look forward to hearing from you. :) https://www.scribblehub.com/series/749073/feelings-and-fondness/

Here is my psychological, slice-of-life novel. I look forward to hearing from you, Danny. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/749073/feelings-and-fondness/

Here is my novel. Psychological slice-of-life. I look forward to hearing from you. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/749073/feelings-and-fondness/

This is my historical fiction novel, with the main genre being psychological. I know the cover isn't great, but it's the best I can do at the moment. There are twelve chapters, but the first five are definitely complete and edited to the best of my ability. I look forward to hearing from you. :)...

This is my historical fiction novel, with the main genre being psychological. I'm good with the default option of a thread reply. Do I want it straight? Yes... No... Bend it a little? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/749073/feelings-and-fondness/

This is my historical fiction novel, with the main genre being psychological. I just finished it up. I'm good with either a PM or reply to this thread for feedback. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/749073/feelings-and-fondness/

Hey! I really did appreciate your honest and helpful feedback on my first story a couple of months ago. I've just started a sequel and now have a completed first chapter. I'd be most grateful for your insight, suggestions or general feedback on any improvement I could do to it...

Much appreciated, thank you! I'm glad you liked my tale of Robin and his little buddy, Timothy. I did detect some errors a few weeks ago and fixed them. This has been edited and polished to the best of my ability. The story is intended for an audience as young as ten years old, thus it has to...

I believe I have something that fits nicely into this criteria. I'd love to hear back from you :) https://www.scribblehub.com/series/749073/feelings-and-fondness/

Hi there. This sounds like just the sort of thing I'm looking for. Here is my story. I look forward to hearing back from you. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/749073/feelings-and-fondness/

Here is my recently edited story. Hopefully you find it intriguing. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/749073/feelings-and-fondness/

I did originally request some feedback on this, but I deleted it as I realized there was quite a lot of editing I had to do on it first. Here is my human literature. In it you will find themes from popular titles such as The Curious Incident Of The Dog In The Nighttime, Diary of a Wimpy Kid...

Okay, I think I'm finally ready for this. I apologize for deleting my request a few days ago, but I had a lot of work to do based on some other feedback I received. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/749073/feelings-and-fondness/ In it you will find themes from popular titles such as The...

Ah, I apologize. I guess I might have misunderstood. Yes, I suppose I might have neglected to flesh out that particular detail. In the first chapter I'm trying to convey that Robin feels things deeply, and has certain traits that foreshadow his diagnosis of high-functioning autism towards the...

I appreciate your insight. This beginning part has changed quite a bit since I first wrote it, but after I received another critique a day ago about the first chapter, I had an idea of how to evolve the first couple of chapters so they will flow better, and hopefully provide more insight without...

I appreciate this, thank you. I have had previous feedback which was critical over the flashback at the beginning and several other points. I have a soft spot for Timothy as he's loosely based on a childhood friend with a similar age gap, and Robin becomes fond of him to the point that he sees...

Here is my completed story. I believe I've polished it, but feel free to let me know if you do find anything that could be improved. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/749073/feelings-and-fondness/

Here is my recently finished work. I'd greatly appreciate any insight you could offer. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/749073/feelings-and-fondness/