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Thanks for the feedback! The grammar part - I did that to avoid referring to the characters just 'Cedric' and 'he'. But I get what you mean and there is less of it in later chapters. The story part - I haven't even watched dragon ball, but anyways. MC just made his face look old using the...

I would be grateful if anyone would read my novel and give any feedback. I asked for it not so long ago, but got almost no story feedback itself (And wrote over 4k words since then). I would be happy to get any feedback at all, but i want other's thoughts about the story. Thanks! Link...

Hey, i have read the first chapter. It looks nice, but few small things that i would mention: - Your characters talk in [ ] which is slightly confusing at the start. I mean most authors just use " " but I get what is the reason of the way you did it, so you could state 'who' says that. - " She...

Alr, thanks. I pretty much agree with most of your points like pacing and I already fixed that in the 4th chapter. About the LitRPG. I used numbers to show that regular trainings have slow progress while sparring is way better, which leads to him meeting another character. But it was in the...

Hey, so i wrote 4 chapters already but never got any actual review at all. I even made a poll with six answers at the end of the last one, with potential opinions from 'Really good' to 'really bad'. But even with that i still got no feedback somehow. There is 27 people who got to the last...

I started writing and posting not long ago and i am wondering what glossary tab is. I mean, every book i checked (around 4 or 5) had it empty and i didn't add anything in there in my book too. can anyone explait this?