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Well, I can agree that maybe I overdid Nicole's thoughts. I have no idea how to do the emotional aspects or romantic atmospthere at all, to be honest. Also I said it's big when compared to any other smut scene I wrote before. And maybe lack of context made it worse too. Anyways, thanks for the...

Don't know if you are still doing it here, but here is mine - The Island of Wonder Thanks

Hello. As the thread's title says, I wrote a bigger sex scene in my story and need feedback. Though I already did a few small ones, none of them were as big as this one. As the scene itself is at the end of the 6th chapter, you can jump right to it, or give the whole story a try. Feedback for...

So, that is the question. I tried to, but did not find any way to. Also, I went through some other stories and couldn't find any, so maybe that is just impossible. I wanted to put a map in there, since i already made one for myself to not mess up with the directions where characters go.

I know i am a little late but no, i use a tablet already :D Huion something something, don't remember the numbers

Hello. As you could guess by the name, here I am going to talk and pour my tilt of trying to learn drawing from nothing. Those are my actual first tries, so expect it to be bad, not gonna lie. Drawing in Krita, at least for now. Attempt 1 - The worst one. I just opened the app and started...

Well, yes. But that's why I am asking about experience of other authors.

Hello, I have a question to the authors. How hard is writing two different (or more) stories at once? I know concentrating on one is probably better, but I am wondering. I have at least 3 potential story ideas excluding the one I am writing already and I am afraid I will never get to use those...

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Hello, I have small question. Which type of showing stats is better? The one I have now (The numbers are same color as the ones in the table): ----------------------------- level: 15 Stats - Physical - Strength: 242 Dexterity: 160 Vitality: 225 Mental - Intelligence: 170 Willpower: 238...

2 - I see you improved this part, but now it's confusing what the whole 'male guard' thing is. What I mean, why MC has a guardian? 'my parents entrusted him to be my guardian outside of my house, meaning he basically had full reign over my personal life' Is MC's family rich aristocracy that...

Hey, i have read only first chapter of your story for now, so I my opinion is limited to only that. Anyways, here is everything I can say: - You wrote Akira to be a girl, but made it obvious with saying it's 'male'. I think it's better to delete the ' '. - 'Why the emphasis on 'male'? That's...

Hey, I know i am a bit late and you got the answer already but still. I posted mine on author.today and use it if i am looking for russian stories.

Hello, I have few general questions to ask. 1 - First question is about tags - is it better to put tags of future/planned content or add them as they appear for the first time in the story? 2 - Second one - novel's covers. For now, i have this one. I tried to generate some ai images but...

1 Yes. And almost same, i left when i was 8. 2 I speedrunned first few chapters, now i have to go back and fix it too. 3 tbh i still don't get what you mean by that but okay :D

Hey, i have read the first chapter and here are my thoughts (very subjective). Also i didn't read the feedback above, to talk only about what i think. 1 - You are the first author (except me) who i see who uses '-' for speech and " " for thoughts. Probably becouse i mostly read russian books...

Hello, after some time here, i got few questions that i would like to ask. 1) What are the differences between smut, adult and ecchi genres? All i know is that ecchi is more light version of smut. 2) What is considered good or normal conversion of page viewers to readers? I have 1,342 page...

Thanks for the advices, though what would be the reason of the review bombing? It's not that i am cutting off the plot or any important things, just stuff that someone like/dislike. If not on the Patreon, i had a thought of posting two chapters - one with nsfw and one without, both on the SH. I...

So, I saw few starting/new authors already having a Patreon, despite having a pretty low amount of readers and views. Not that it's bad, but now i think of starting my own Patreon page. I am novice author too (14k posted words so far with slightly over 100 readers getting to 10k words point.)...

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