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Ty for the responses, I’ll try and work on that synopsis today. As for the cover, that’ll take some more time because my artistic department doesn’t exist. I could always hop into paint with a bunch more PNGs Edit: As for grammar and mechanics, I do kind of suck at that. I’ll also try to...

This is the first story I've ever written, so it's a bit rough. I'd really appreciate any and all feedback. What am I doing okay? What am I doing poorly? What should I focus on? Is the synopsis eye-catching enough? Are the opening two chapters interesting? I know the cover image kinda sucks...

After a quick read of the prologue, u seem to be using a lot of AI assistance. It's kind of hard to judge its merit and your style if it's so AI manipulated. Even if you're not super good at english, I think it's better to put that out there instead of something that isn't wholly yours so that...

I like it, will keep following along. I'm not a huge Sci-Fi guy but I've enjoyed the stuff I've read, and I can get into this kinda formula, where the villains are sorta silly. Even if it gets more serious later on, as long as it keeps this same spirit, it'll be an enjoyable read

I've reclaimed my victory

My first attempt at really writing a story I would appreciate any feedback on it (imagine it hasn't been approved yet, though) The cover isn't very good but please tell me if it sucks way too much. Like, enough that I'd have to remove it

I'll get a better profile picture in like five minutes

I declare my victory now. Please let me stay the winner, I need that.